Comments | dancinbutterfly: Fic: Supernaturally Eerie 5/? (Supernatural/Eerie Indiana x-over, Slash)

dancinbutterfly

Fic: Supernaturally Eerie 5/? (Supernatural/Eerie Indiana x-over, Slash)

Oct 08, 2006 07:06

Title: Supernaturally Eerie
Part: 5/?
Series: Supernatural/Eerie, Indiana
Author: dancinbutterflyPairing: Marshall/Dean ( Read more... )

fanfic, eerie indiana, slash, spn

Comments 15

tabaqui October 8 2006, 07:15:53 UTC

*laaaa*!
:)
Dude. Way to go! I love Marine!John telling them fix and taking the car and people being slammed into doors and Dean quantifying infidelity and...
Yis!
Hawt.
Fun.
Funny.
Luff!

marinarusalka October 8 2006, 16:24:13 UTC

Yaaay,they finally hooked up! I like how you brought it about, too. I was surprised at first by the hostility between them at the start of the chapter, but then once they talked, it made perfect sense. Dean thinking that Simon is Marshall's girlfriend was priceless! I'm glad they cleared that up, though. :-)

I'm really enjoying how you write John, too. Very much the hunter, and the Marine, and the Dad. I laughed when he took off in the car and left Dean and Mars to work things out.

This series just keeps getting better and better. :-)

dancinbutterfly October 8 2006, 18:14:27 UTC

You say "yay" I say "Thank goodness." you h ave NO idea how hard that crap was. Ask my beta how many weeks she harassed me. It was lots. Lots and lots.

Dean thinking Simon is Marshall's girlfriend...*sighs* Thats so freaking important and I'm really glad you thought it was amusing. *loves on Simon*

John is so freaking difficult to write. Getting him write takes more time than almost anything else but he's so important I cant NOT write him, can I?

Thank you for writing.

marinarusalka October 8 2006, 18:53:09 UTC

I'm really glad you're not glossing over Simon's importance to Marshall, even though logistically, Simon can't be present in the story yet. It's the sort of thing that's very easy to neglect, but you're handling it very well.

dancinbutterfly October 8 2006, 19:12:12 UTC

I would never gloss over Simon. He's my fave and half of my Eerie OTP(yes, I ship Simon/Marshall). To me Simon's a part of Marshall, and for me to neglect him would be neglecting Marshall's character. Thanks so much for sticking with me.

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saellyn October 8 2006, 16:49:57 UTC

Wow, I am loving your characterizations more and more. Dean at his best, horny and laconic, John oblivious, and Marshall is just awesome. Another great, chapter, thanks!

dancinbutterfly October 9 2006, 02:22:36 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my boys. Dean as laconic? *Sighs* Good word. Makes me think of Oz from buffy.

mahaliem October 8 2006, 21:14:31 UTC

I really love this series.

dancinbutterfly October 9 2006, 03:26:04 UTC

thank you. Glad you like it.

forensicxjunkie October 9 2006, 02:36:00 UTC

dude...WTF happened to me being ahead of the game?!

Anyway, LOVES! Oh, the LOVES! YAY! I'm just a wee bit tired right now, so this was like woah awesome when it should probably be OMFG!!! *squee!!!* YAY! *fangirl bounce* awesome, but I can't really type meaning I can't really read, but YAY! MORE!