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dancinbutterfly

Venture Bros. Fic

Sep 29, 2006 14:22

Title: Venturing Forth
Fandom: The Venture Bros.
Pairing: Dean/Triana
Rating:PG-13
Warning: Unbeta'd sorry.
Summary: Triana Orpheus has a couple conversations on the compound.

( Brock's nice enough for a guy that has a license to rip out a guys spine with his bare hands. She knows, she’s seen it, the license, not the whole spine-removal thing because gross. Plus he has shit together in away the rest of the Ventures just...don't. )

fanfic, venture bros

Comments 17

woobabys October 1 2006, 03:59:47 UTC

Loved your fic!

This was my first VB fic and I’m glad it was about Dean and Triana. They are my OTP (followed closely by Dr Girlfriend/The Monarch)!

I liked your portrayal of the first kiss - it's realistic (not great but still tingly). I also think your version of Triana is believable. She doesn’t come of as angry goth and she has shown a real vulnerability - especially over the zombie and the closet thing. She's a nice person and can understand what it’s like living with abnormal father.

I also got the vibe that she liked Dean at the end of the Victor Echo November episode too.

Is it okay if I pimp your fic over on my LJ?

dancinbutterfly October 1 2006, 04:08:22 UTC

First off - Dude, she TOTALLY likes Dean. Not only was desert her idea, she put up with Lady Windermere's Fan AND Hank's random bouts of isanity(cause Dean is naive but Hank is just CRAZY sometimes "It's like he channel's crazy dead people!") for Dean. *grins ( ... )

dancinbutterfly October 1 2006, 04:09:14 UTC

oh yea, pimp away. just let them know the grammer is probably a bit off. I've gotten SLAMMED for that.

woobabys October 1 2006, 06:35:43 UTC

You've been pimped!

You know the Lady Windermere's Fan bit was painfully embarrassing, but so sweet at the same time. I was kind of sad when Brock told Dean to forget the pushing in her chair and kissing her hand thing. Some girls like the romantic thing!!! (Which was why I was glad you added the kiss on the hand at the end!!)