If You Return (5/?): On the Nature of Things

[dancesands]

Comments

[noxx22]

omg thanks for updating!!! \O/

man I swear Tiffany is so mysterious
when I look back at ERTELT she changed a lot
...okay well yes since its been years...xD

I swear Jessica heard Tiffany sing before .____."
when Jessica was singing in the classroom and Tiffany walked in on her
I guess she doesn't remember that...
hmmm more like...Jessica didn't really pay much attention towards Tiffany like Tiffany did towards her. So Jessica doesn't remember much about Tiffany I suppose...and from the earlier chapters Tiffany remembers their days in Kent well lol ahhh

I like this chapter ^^ hahaha
and that whole armrest, closeness thing hmmmn I cant really say...so much but to me it looks...like the reflection of their relationship xD

thanks for this chapter ^^
I hope you'll be able to update soon :]

[dancesands]

I suppose Jessica finds Tiffany a little opaque, nowadays XD

I really liked writing this part of the chapter too XD Thank you for leaving comments so faithfully, it cheers a writer up.

(Sorry, this is the November update. Feeling quite swamped and tired.)

[dancesands]

Thanks for leaving a comment! Yes, I gave an evil cackle of delight when I realized how it'd be so ironic for them to sing it, and it seems to be popular as a song to cover! (Can't beat "Hey Jude" or "Somewhere Over the Rainbow" though...)

This section just seems like fanservice for JeTi UST, eh? XD

[anonymous]

Omg dr!!! You used a carpenters song omggggggggg freakkkkk outtttt lol~
i love listening to them. Well that was a nice update.. Makes me curious about which path you're going to take this fanfic :P

All the best! And see ya next update
Your favorite,
Deo

[dancesands]

*snorts* My favorite what, Deo? Glad you liked the update and the song choice; I didn't know you liked them!

(I know the general path, but drawing a detailed map requires a surprising amount of work. And detours.)

Thanks for leaving a comment!

[anonymous]

ohhh I loved it! All this teasing. I can really see how J is falling for Tiffany, and the way you write it, it's like I'm experiencing it myself too! :) I can't wait for the next part!

[dancesands]

I'm glad it feels real to you! Thank you for leaving a comment.

[anonymous]

I checked if you updated ssf yet but I guess livejournal will have to do even if I'm an anon, yeah? I liked this chapter. When the light went out! My heart. @_______@ Also, a smoking Tiffany is oddly hot but well. Yoona, still where art thou?

[dancesands]

Ahaha, I suppose you're a SSF reader/commenter then! I'm glad you liked it XD