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dancesands

If You Return (4/?): Ping!

Sep 23, 2011 23:36

Comments 10

regreted September 30 2011, 16:45:16 UTC

d'awwwww you made me tear up a bit... Not the story just, when i lived in korea i would ALWAYS link arms wit my friends.... T.,T

dancesands September 30 2011, 17:18:43 UTC

I don't think that was my intention! XD Why so sad?~

anonymous September 30 2011, 17:32:27 UTC

Fantastic & brilliant writing! Love how subtly flirtatious and good humored tiffany was with the cat plushie. I sense a greater development for JeTi's dynamics with the simple act of having jessica's arm around Tiffany. I definitely will look forward to the next update! Can't wait!

dancesands September 30 2011, 17:41:39 UTC

Hello anon! Thanks for dropping a comment :) JeTi will need to develop fosho, because this is ending in two chapters!

(And which anon are you?)

anonymous September 30 2011, 18:05:44 UTC

Does this really got to end so quickly? It's so hard to find good writing like yours! The realism helps us readers relate to the characters in so many ways! It isn't melodramatic or overly mushy and sweet like many works out there. Very very believable writing and it takes skill to put life in words like you did. Extremely commendable! It is my first time commenting here actually. I remember discovering your site a few months back and saving it in my favourites but i never got the time to read all the wonderful pieces you have written. I used to read quite a bit of fanfics till university life swallowed me whole and refused to spit me out :D today's the rare few times that I check soshipops and your writing is definitely a pleasant treat! I'll make sure to drop by more often!

dancesands October 1 2011, 12:46:57 UTC

Yes, because it can't drag on! Jessica has to leave Seoul, and also to account for her actions--or lack thereof in the past. If summer school usually ends by mid-August, and I'm really dragging Sica's out for narrative purposes here, then we have...at most 3 weeks left in narrative-time.

Thank you so much for all that comment love <3 It is really appreciated. I'm glad you're enjoying this story!

noxx22 October 1 2011, 03:48:20 UTC

Heya! leaving a comment here instead of SSF since I read it here first rofl.

Hahaha that was so unexpected of Jessica to just come toward Tiffany like that.
Tiffany accepted the situation, but it seems like she's quite hesitant...like...she wants to, but she's holding herself back.

x) I see big JeTi developtment in this chapter <3 it's like...when Jessica uhmm...finally accepted? Tiffany (well that's how I kinda saw it xD) things for them just accelerated.

LOL Jessica's gaydar is so spot on xD hahaha
and LOL I freaking laughed when she was checking out the girls legs! xD loooool its quite amusing.

and LOL SooRi hahaha I love SooRi in a "bromance" type of way HAHAHA

and the ending here was awwwwww <3

this is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it :D
thanks for writing ^^
cant wait for the next chapter :D

dancesands October 1 2011, 12:48:50 UTC

Everyone seems so amused every time Jessica checks out someone's legs?! I don't get it :( I hadn't planned for it to be a big issue.

Thanks for leaving a comment! The next chapter is...being written :D

noxx22 October 1 2011, 15:25:34 UTC

hahaha! xD Idk....I guess its because the way she is and how she appreciates them...its inexplicably quite amusing LOL x')

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dancesands October 7 2011, 10:09:58 UTC

Thanks for leaving a comment! I'm glad it kept you interested for a few hours XD

I'm looking forward to finishing the chapter too...