As you can tell, it's written from Jessica's POV, so she's not looking out for signs of Tiffany's attraction XD We see what she sees. It'd be nice to show the reader what Tiffany is thinking, but it would spoil the effect for which I'm going. As for whether Tiffany is attracted...I think we'll hear from her in a couple of chapters. (Finally.)
ooh. I like the Han river part, the imagery of the two of them just sitting there and Jessica being shot down at her attempt in conversation. I still love the slow pace and Jessica's sleepy thoughts, but hmm Tiffany is kind of hard to imagine, her being "centered" and confident. After reading the Tiffany from the first fanfic, who was wonderfully detailed and relatable, I think the new Tiffany could be fleshed out more here to make her more real. :P I dunno, just have difficulty picturing how she's different. haha anyways I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more.
Thank you for your comment! This Tiffany does seem very different from the self-conscious Tiffany in ERT, ELT, doesn't she? I think she wouldn't have been the sort to say breezily to Jessica, "Supper. I'll pick you up." in ERT, ELT, which is why Jessica think that there's something different about Tiffany (not that she ever really thought much about Tiffany before). I'll definitely be fleshing out Tiffany's character to show how she's different, from Jessica's POV, in Chapter 3. Thanks for telling me what you felt about this chapter :)
re-commenting to make up for my failure of a first try.
I can feel the JeTi brewing? But then again, nothing's for sure and you like to mess with your readers... (i.e. in Every Right Turn, Every Left Turn, leaving us with a cliffhanger for nearly a year)
"Centered. That was it. That was what felt so different to her about Tiffany. Tiffany had never felt so centered, so anchored before, and it tugged gently at Jessica, pulling at her as she drifted along." -Loved this part.. As a Tiffany worshiper, and even though this is AU, I can relate to the tug that Jessica feels. From now on, it's just waiting for the time when she lets Tiffany's pull consume her whole.. Just like it consumed me :(
Don't make us wait too long for the next update dancesands! haha But really, you are good job! I want to visit the Han River with you one day :'D
The JeTi is brewing, but it could also be snuffed out at any time. I didn't even intend that ending to be a cliffhanger; just your regular open-ended conclusion~
Perhaps Jessica will move, but Tiffany also will react, especially when we hear about YoonSic in the next chapter.
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In a total non stalkerish way of course. XD
Urgh, I can't figure Tiffany out. Does she like Jessica? Still? And Jessica is such a byun. THIGHS. XD
Thanks for the update!
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Jessica appreciates the finer things in life :3
Thank you for your comments :)
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I can feel the JeTi brewing? But then again, nothing's for sure and you like to mess with your readers... (i.e. in Every Right Turn, Every Left Turn, leaving us with a cliffhanger for nearly a year)
"Centered. That was it. That was what felt so different to her about Tiffany. Tiffany had never felt so centered, so anchored before, and it tugged gently at Jessica, pulling at her as she drifted along."
-Loved this part.. As a Tiffany worshiper, and even though this is AU, I can relate to the tug that Jessica feels. From now on, it's just waiting for the time when she lets Tiffany's pull consume her whole.. Just like it consumed me :(
Don't make us wait too long for the next update dancesands! haha
But really, you are good job! I want to visit the Han River with you one day :'D
Love, Deo/JeTified
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Perhaps Jessica will move, but Tiffany also will react, especially when we hear about YoonSic in the next chapter.
Next month, everyone, next month!
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