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LJ Idol Week Three: It's a trap!
Nov 18, 2010 16:42
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Cut for your eyes, not (as much) for triggers this time.
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worldofcharlie
November 19 2010, 00:08:05 UTC
*likes this*
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basric
November 19 2010, 00:30:08 UTC
Well done. I enjoyed reading your work. Well done.
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dance_of_flame
November 19 2010, 00:38:46 UTC
Thank you very much. :)
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dance_of_flame
November 19 2010, 00:39:10 UTC
Thanks. :)
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myrna_bird
November 19 2010, 01:40:15 UTC
And will we find out what happens? Lovely descriptive fantasy tale. I really like how you wrote Shadowsong's words.
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dance_of_flame
November 19 2010, 02:20:53 UTC
You might. :) I had thought about making this a multi-chaptered short story. And, thank you! :)
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solstice_singer
November 19 2010, 16:27:57 UTC
I enjoyed this. You tell a story very, very well. Keep up the good work.
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dance_of_flame
November 20 2010, 08:22:01 UTC
Thank you very much. :) I will certainly do my best.
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lawchicky
November 21 2010, 23:15:10 UTC
I liked the fairytale quality to this.
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dance_of_flame
November 24 2010, 05:11:12 UTC
Thank you. :) I've not had my fiction described in such ways before, but I think I like that one. ^.^
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Interesting.
ellakite
November 23 2010, 18:48:55 UTC
Unusual. Mysterious. And powerful. Wish I could write like this.
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Re: Interesting.
dance_of_flame
November 24 2010, 05:07:45 UTC
Wow, that's quite a compliment! Thank you. o.o
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