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Naruto Fic: Embracing Darkness 1/1

Apr 01, 2007 23:11

Title: Embracing Darkness
Author: DaMoyre
Genre: shonen-ai
Pairing: OroKimi
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for naruto_500's prompt "First Kiss".
Word Count: 769

( Despite what others might think about his master, Orochimaru-sama was generous. )

naruto fic, orokimi, kimimaro, orochimaru

Comments 16

sharona1x2 April 20 2007, 09:28:00 UTC

That was excellent! You did a great job of showing the relationship between them. This line in particular stood out for me:

The gold, snake-like eyes had become the sun of Kimimaro's new world, basking in the glory of their praise and approval.

♥

damoyre_fics April 20 2007, 12:39:19 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked it. That line is what started the fic! You must be psychic or something.

*hugs*

lastofthesane May 13 2007, 02:13:28 UTC

...I don't even know where to begin with this review. D: But that fic totally captures Kimimaro, and the metaphors and use of language were just asdfghjkl AMAZING.

Will keep an eye out for more of your work. ;3 ♥

damoyre May 13 2007, 14:08:11 UTC

I think 90% of the stuff I write is Orochimaru-centric, and I always write from his POV. This was my first attempt at writing from Kimimaro's side, so it makes me really happy to know that I was able to make him justice. :)

Thank you for the lovely comment! <3333

pikagirl October 10 2007, 23:26:50 UTC

That was beautiful! I'm saving this to memories ^_^