Fic: For Her

Nov 04, 2010 20:38

Title: For Her
Characters: Batman, Jim Gordon
Rating: G.
Disclaimer: DC owns almost all of them.
Warning: Character death (Inspired by the last panel of Bruce Wayne: The Road Home: Commissioner Gordon)
Word Count: 649
A/N: Every year, I try to do a little something for the Day of the Dead.

Jim Gordon felt cold )

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arch_schatten November 4 2010, 22:13:15 UTC
T_T T_T whyyyyyyy aughhh, lol, I wasn't expecting Jim to.. to.. die! ever! augh, aughhhm, againnnn! blindsided by the power of mortality!

I love how present Gotham is in this, even though you barely conjure her -a couple of words about her streets, that's all it took, and yet you can definitely feel her in the room. I love how.. sadly at ease Bruce is in this, and how strong and curt Jim is. That's Jim, always. Such a brave front for all the horrors of Gotham, and all he does is for others, to serve and protect. It's a beautiful last night for Jim. I'm glad the rogues agreed, too. So wonderful! thank you so much for sharing, Dan!! I missed it this year...

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damos November 5 2010, 14:09:07 UTC
Thanks, Mina.

Yeah. I originally intended to show more of that conversation but they both kind of stared at me like I had no business overhearing what they were going to say and wouldn't understand most of it anyway. I tried to eavesdrop, but all I got were snippets of conversation.

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damos November 5 2010, 14:10:12 UTC
Thanks, Filly.

This just hit me when I finished the last panel of BW:TRH:CG. Also, comics need shorter titles these days!

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ext_219879 November 4 2010, 22:30:11 UTC
Oh... OH my god, JIM.

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damos November 5 2010, 14:11:12 UTC
Thanks, Yena.

Yeah, this whole idea just popped into my head fully formed.

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