Fic: The World's Not Waiting (For Joe Trohman to Stop Being a Pussy...) - Joe/Patrick [17/?]

[rosiedoes]

Title: The World's Not Waiting (For Joe Trohman to Stop Being a Pussy and Start Going For What He Wants) [17/?]
Summary: AU Timeline - Teenage angst and Crayola Rainbows. Or, Joe saw him first.
Author: icedmaple
Betas: untelling & shiny_starlight
Rating: R at absolute max.
Pairing: Joe/Patrick
Words: c. 6,300 this chapter.
Author's notes: This fic is written in a slightly AU

Comments

[ellenblews]

FC???
omg. you had me crying. i was yelling at my computer. i was all "DON'T DO IT JOE. DON'T FUCKING DO IT!!!!"
omg. w-why???
more? soon??

[untelling]

I must say again that this was very, very well done. I love the way you write and I love the way you pull my feelings out with these two.

[gotobedpete]

Too tired and sappy/sad to write a review, but I wanted to point out:

"Sighing heavily, Joe got up off the floor and climbed onto the best beside him"

Pretty sure that should be 'bed.'

[rosiedoes]

Obviously.

[klashfor]

Aw that was completely heartwrenching. Seriously, it was written beautifully, but it was so hard to read, just because it was so sad.

Sorry I couldn't give you a read through, my internet's been fucked since we got a "newer, faster" modem.

I completely love this story.

[prototypicgirl]

Oh, this was beautifully written

It's soo sad though.

Well worth the wait.