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Modern Day - 5 Chapter Zutara - 5C

Mar 06, 2007 14:56

Title: 5 Chapter Zutara - Modern Day
Rating: Older Teen
Chapter: 5C
Fandom: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Pairings/Warnings: Zutara, Sukka
Summary: Modern Day AU. Katara, a fresh graduate from BSS University, gets her dream job at a company Zuko is the owner of. The problem is she does know that when they first meet and she throws water in his face.

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Comments 7

anonymous March 23 2007, 22:56:03 UTC

*chuckles* What a positively [i]charming[/i] little tale! I found this to be both humorous and a moving read.

And with your mention of Toph, I assume you're going to make a sequel?

Sincerly, K9: The First

damagectrl March 26 2007, 01:38:35 UTC

Unfortunately, no sequel this time. Don't have enough time or creative energy to make one.

Thanks for dropping by! :)

From Kóokay anonymous March 29 2007, 06:38:01 UTC

Hi, i just read all chapters today and i have to say that it wasn´t an easy task considering i have a three year old girl, but in the end i was able to finish the reading. It is not as long as your other fics, yet the story is full of details. I loved the way you handled the "AU", although i'm not so sure it is a real "AU", i mean, everything takes place in the avatar world (the nations, the fliying bisons of resorts in the poles) that i loved. Then, the latinization (does that word even exists?) for Iroh, just to be Airo, the way it would be in a latin language such as spanish --that one i speak-- Both characters (zuko-katara) well defined and very similar to the show, the flirting Jet was hilarious and i come to hate Azula, it is really sad it was so short 'cuz i'm used to your long, long stories. I'm in my way to read the Kana-Pakky one but i'm not sure what is the easiest way to access it... well, now i leave you before i bore you to death. Thank you for your stories...

Re: From Kóokay damagectrl March 29 2007, 15:53:31 UTC

Hi,
I'm glad you were able to read all of it. Considering your three year old, that is quite an impressive task to do in one day. ^_^ Thank you for taking time to read it.
It was fun coming up with different twists that play on the original story and original world. I think that was my favorite part.
Ai Ro is how it would be spelled in romanized Japanese; and in Chinese, to my understanding, the 'i' in Iroh's name is pronounced more akeen to 'ai' than a singular 'i', which is why I chose that particular spelling.
It was short, but for a 5 chapter story, I think it came out too long. I just can't write drabbles. When I tried, they were at least 2 pages each and I was told they are supposed to be roughly around 100-500 words.
Anyway, thank you so much for dropping by and reading! <3

Wow!~ riaru April 22 2007, 22:22:34 UTC

What an amazingly well done story. I loved what you did with the characters (I also loved your other work on ff.net, by the way :3) and really, I loved the way you portrayed Jet. He was just REALLY amusing and very...Jet. Cool, suave, and cocky. Perfect. XD A great read, I hope to read more of your work <3

Re: Wow!~ damagectrl April 24 2007, 18:02:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :) I look forward to writing more Zutara when I have time. I enjoyed writing Jet. Humorous, cool Jet is usually a lot more fun than obsessive, overly aggressive Jet. ^_^

Thanks again for dropping by!

frieda_baggins May 29 2007, 11:22:00 UTC

Well done! I really love this story; while it's set in AU, all of them are still in character, even Ty Lee! heehee..too bad Toph's not included, I would have loved to see how she fit into the AU! I loved how even the main conflict of this modern story mirrors that of the actual series. And speaking of series -- Incarnate: The Final Wandmaker! I also loved how it was this cartoon that brought them together! It's a ship within a ship, heehee. Keep up the good work, and I'm onto your next fic! :D