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daisysusan June 3 2011, 23:10:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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silviakundera June 3 2011, 01:04:00 UTC
This was very emotionally satisfying. Great Eduardo POV and I really loved him examining his priorities and regrets, and how much Mark had matured and grown as a person as well.

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daisysusan June 3 2011, 23:10:29 UTC
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked Eduardo; he was great fun to write.

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daisysusan June 3 2011, 23:14:01 UTC
Thank so so much for reading! I'm really glad you liked the style (and grown-up!Mark).

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ohnvm June 3 2011, 01:10:00 UTC
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :')

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daisysusan June 3 2011, 23:15:00 UTC
Thank you!

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waluk June 3 2011, 01:32:04 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! ♥
This was so lovely and your narrative felt very fresh and original to me.
I love how naturally this flows, and how Wardo's up in the middle of the night, nodding to himself. ♥
DUDE I LOVED IT.
The whole tentative rebuilding of their friendship reminded me of a fallout and reconstruction I had with my best friend (minus the lawsuits and billions of dollars, obvs).
THIS IS FLAWLESS AND YOU SHOULD FEEL FLAWLESS. ♥

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daisysusan June 4 2011, 02:20:49 UTC
Oh goodness, thank you so much. ♥ I'm so glad you called it original, my biggest fear was that this was all just a giant cliché.

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