part 3

[daisynala87]

Comments

[iwontbeafool]

Wow! This is turning so well! I really, really love the Zac on this story. He's so sweet and caring to his sister and also to Lindsey <3

[malfunkshon]

You definitely have a Zac hair fetish:

" I watch him pull the hair tie from his hair sighing."

So many sweet little details in this story. Zac who deliberately burps to make Callie laugh....Zac and Lindsey playing basketball, the background stuff about Zac and Callie's dad. It's making the story really rich and dense and definitely your best so far. But you need a title!!! :D

[zacgirl1]

Awwww this story is so sweet. It's so adorable how much they love each other and how their friendship keeps going strong after being separated for so many years.