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Apr 01, 2010 23:14



“ some things just can not be ”
Lost. Benjamin Linus, Richard Alpert, Sun-Hwa Kwon. One-sided Ben/Sun.
PG. 2,755 words. Spoilers up to "The Package".
Jacob asks much of his followers and nothing of his chosen. For Benjamin Linus, this is a bitter pill to swallow--but it's not just him who's trying to digest it. As Richard accompanies Ben on a hunt ( Read more... )

t: one-shot, p: ben/sun, c: richard alpert, f: lost, c: sun-hwa kwon, c: benjamin linus, g: gen

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usedshoes April 2 2010, 21:29:50 UTC
Oh, how I love this!

The dialog between Ben and Richard is just pure gold. Do I even need to mention how much I love the end with Ben/Sun?

Great, great fic.

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buongiornodaisy April 2 2010, 21:33:00 UTC
Thank you! :D

I intended this to be a cracky/fluffy fic about Ben getting a boar for Sun, but Richard decided to ninja his way into the story. Regardless what my own worst critic says about the results I did enjoy the hell out of writing Ben and Richard reflecting on their roles as followers of Jacob.

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usedshoes April 2 2010, 21:46:03 UTC
That would have been amazing also but just add a touch of Richard and you got everything a girl could ask for in a fic, haha.

You got the tone exact to the point too. Reminds me of the conversation they had on Ben's birthday with Annie's dolls. But yes, Richard would be more adult one regarding Jacob with Ben still being bitter. I could see them having a conversation like this if the writers weren't so busy making everyone yell at each other, lol.

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buongiornodaisy April 2 2010, 23:41:39 UTC
Thank you! :D

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buongiornodaisy April 3 2010, 00:05:34 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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ohioala19 April 3 2010, 01:58:09 UTC
This was a great fic, I love Richard and would love to see more Ben and Richard interaction since they've known each other for so long, I love Richard's line about hot growing old just makes you older, not wiser, i thought that was great

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buongiornodaisy April 3 2010, 10:19:21 UTC
Thank you! :D

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chrryblssmninja April 3 2010, 05:55:54 UTC
aww this is so sweet

I like it a lot

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buongiornodaisy April 3 2010, 10:19:33 UTC
Thanks. ♥

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