*looks awkward* Okay, so here's the thing....

[daisycm83]

Have I mentioned yet how very, very evil control_freak80 is? Because it totally is worth repeating. Even becoming a mantra, of sorts. I was going to wait to post this until after Austen was all up and neat and tied up with a bow. But see, she is impatient and demands that I post it NOW. Never mind that I'm a little afraid that posting it while also still posting

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[smittywing]

Ooh, now here's a threesome that (who?) makes sense to me. My usual problem is that there usually seems to be one "pairing" within the trio that doesn't really fit, just works because the other two "pairings" work so well. But I can see and it's so very, very pretty.

I think this was my favorite line:

The voice in his head has gone silent, no berating remarks and scathing self-doubt...

Because Rodney's criticism is as much self-directed as lashed out, and for that to quiet indicates that this means a lot to him. I also like the Duet references a great deal. I've always thought that sharing a body would have bonded McKay and Cadman in some sort of odd, difficult-to-define way.

[daisycm83]

I know, I have the exact same problem with so many threesomes. This is one of the few I've ever found that I can wrap my head around while simultaneously causing no squick issues for me.

Glad you liked it!

[zortified]

I really liked this, though ironically I did have to squint against the het bits. ;-) But I really loved the final paragraph.

[daisycm83]

Glad that you liked it despite the het factor. (I don't do straight out slash, typically, but two men and a women? Yes, please.)

[zellieh]

I really like this. It's like an iceberg; there's so much hidden under the surface. *g*

[daisycm83]

Thank you!

[starrylizard]

*meep* Melts into a puddle... Yep that fits nicely into the "things that make you go GUH!" category! ...and you still find time to throw in some character study bits. :D

[daisycm83]

*cheers* It made you go guh? Well, then, it did it's job.

[gateruner]

Very nice!