the way you wrote the last line made me think he committed suicide or something, cut cut cut emo emo emo suicide idk. but it was like 'the last thing he saw that night, was the back of donghae's car. after that he passed out, and never woke up again.' okay, it would've worked better if it was the instead of that .. but whatevs.
and just, ppl the f- .. are you kidding? donghae is exactly what that preppy boy needs, who even cares bout them 'im too good for everyone else'-bitches, no hyuk needs someone like hae to liven up his d- .. life. paarties, drinking and infinite fun comes along with donghae and his money. i'd go for that, oh i'd so tap that too. so hyuk, get that foot out of your ass and see what's best for you, or else imma shovel you in that pretty face of yours. i'm so tired right now that's why i'm writing like this.
i thought the date would have some eunhae fluffiness though :( & i seriously love their sarcasm. but hae, your word is to harsh. i hope things between them will get better update soon :)
Huaaaa.... Seem like the date is not success .. Aigoo hae make the mess nee -_- can't wait for the next update!!!!! Interesting storyyyyyyy XDXD Keep up the great work XDXD
i just read this entire story. this is so goood! donghae & hyukjaes sarcasm is seriously entertaining. and kyu and mimi clearly have some sexual tension to resolve, lol i love all of the character personalities. haahha even tho i was hoping that finally something would go right for hae & hyuk, i kinda loved their fail date. hae needs to try harder ;) cant wait for more! good luck :)
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so much is going wrong with those two~~~
hae needs to learn to be more considerate
and hyuk is very hot-tempered, but in a cool and controlled way
ahhhhhh~~~ really........... how are they gonna end up together???
anyways, the side kyumin/Qmi is getting interesting ^-^
update soon~~~
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and just, ppl the f- .. are you kidding? donghae is exactly what that preppy boy needs, who even cares bout them 'im too good for everyone else'-bitches, no hyuk needs someone like hae to liven up his d- .. life. paarties, drinking and infinite fun comes along with donghae and his money. i'd go for that, oh i'd so tap that too. so hyuk, get that foot out of your ass and see what's best for you, or else imma shovel you in that pretty face of yours. i'm so tired right now that's why i'm writing like this.
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& i seriously love their sarcasm.
but hae, your word is to harsh.
i hope things between them will get better
update soon :)
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Aigoo hae make the mess nee -_-
can't wait for the next update!!!!!
Interesting storyyyyyyy XDXD
Keep up the great work XDXD
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this is so goood!
donghae & hyukjaes sarcasm is seriously entertaining. and kyu and mimi clearly have some sexual tension to resolve, lol
i love all of the character personalities.
haahha even tho i was hoping that finally something would go right for hae & hyuk, i kinda loved their fail date.
hae needs to try harder ;)
cant wait for more! good luck :)
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