I'm sorry, I don't want to be rude, but these coords could use some work. Especially the Wa loli one, it's very cheap looking. There doesn't seem to be much of a pattern to it. The dress, the hat, and the socks don't go well together. I would recoment trying to capture a more Asian aesthetic with Wa. The socks look punk, the hat looks steampunk, and the skirt looks classic. That's not really the type of look you should try going for with Wa. If you're a beginner, you should probably stay away from Wa, it's very hard to pull off. You're second one down would look about ten times better if you wore different socks. Those socks are too funky and punk to go with such a classical coord. The colors don't seem to match in many of you're coords, and a lot of the materials look cheap.
Thank you for all the suggestions! I agree the wa-coord is unnecessarily busy and does have more Western than Asian aesthetic to it - and indeed, the socks don't fit too well with the second outfit. Might have been better to go with plain white ones. The only thing I mildly disagree with is my hat looking steampunk-ish, but I'll take your criticism on it not suiting the coord regardless.
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