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(fic) Autonomic

Sep 05, 2010 01:14

Autonomic | radishface
Inception → Cobb/Arthur
The time Cobb almost lost Arthur for good and Arthur almost let him do it. 3222 words. Explicit.
A/N, written for inception_kink for a number of prompts including this, and this.

( These things are becoming familiar: the sinking of his gut, of his senses, when the IV goes in and his mind goes under, the way the first thing he looks for is Cobb when his eyes open again. )

pairing: cobb/arthur, fandom: inception, !fanfic, character: arthur, character: cobb

Comments 39

saintdogstreet September 4 2010, 18:33:28 UTC

Oh, this is quite good. It's very bittersweet, and interesting, and you've got lovely descriptions and I really like the wording of all of Arthur's thoughts, the style of it all, if that makes sense. It's great.

radishface September 5 2010, 12:42:50 UTC

Thank you! Their relationship is definitely not a fluffy one... XD

runwayproject September 4 2010, 22:05:17 UTC

A+
I just love the chemistry between the two.
<3

radishface September 5 2010, 12:48:07 UTC

It's definitely got a codependent element running through it. And I love boys being all codependent and confused around each other. >D

Thank you! <3

poemwithnorhyme September 4 2010, 22:23:13 UTC

Loved this! Just hot as hell, and so in character. Great job!!

radishface September 5 2010, 12:50:28 UTC

Thank you so much... I'm glad you enjoyed it!

animegoil September 5 2010, 02:07:11 UTC

Wow. That was... that was really interseting. I don't know how to describe it, but it was... realistic, and not 'pretty'... and something else, but I can't put my finger on it. I certainly enjoyed it though, and Arthur's logic (about Cobb being his here even if Mal will know down there) was interesting, as well as the sudden change between drunk!Arthur and sober!Arthur. It was well done. I felt that abrupt change, and how they acknowledged what had happened, but acknowledged its mistake as well. <3

radishface September 5 2010, 13:11:36 UTC

They're definitely very pretty (never thought I'd ever be writing fic about a character played by Leo, but there's life for you) and their relationship is fraught with all kinds of unspoken angsty drama... my most favorite sort of dynamic in slash >D

Thank you for your kind words, and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :)

dreamlittleyo September 5 2010, 03:37:06 UTC

This was intense -- I enjoyed the glimpse into Arthur's turned-around headspace, the way Cobb spins him so off balance like this.

radishface September 5 2010, 13:15:26 UTC

The guy gets beat up, shot, and ma(u)led on a regular basis for Cobb. There's gotta be something there. ;)

Thank you for reading. <3 I've always admired your SPN fic so it's great to see you in Inception fandom, too!