It's Just a Feeling

Jan 26, 2012 23:52

A certain playground. x June 19xx.

There She was sitting there, along with the flowers of various colors, the green grass, the sandbox filled with sand from Busan, the blue and pink see-saw, the orange swings, the red tunnel. She was wearing a simple dress. Her hair was only up to her neck. She was wearing reading glasses. She was busy reading a ( Read more... )

one shot, yongseo

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ext_527416 January 26 2012, 17:26:12 UTC
this is great! and funny too :)).. i had a good smile while reading this before going to bed :).. thank you for this shot

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dageneralpatata January 26 2012, 18:04:06 UTC
Thanks for liking it!

And again, good night! HAHA

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teyha90 January 26 2012, 17:43:49 UTC
it's an interesting one but they seriously not going to end together?
i hope yong is a businessman and a rock star ;-)

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dageneralpatata January 26 2012, 18:06:24 UTC
My method of writing lately is based on the song that is featured on here. What I felt was something like this, though there is no way in hell I can understand Yonglish. HAHAHA

And I got the feeling that one has to point out that in life there are always possibilities like this. I felt that one has to try to probe on the bubble of Go-chun to make it stronger, I guess.

So it's kind of bittersweet. It's kind of like my life, really. HAHA

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dageneralpatata January 26 2012, 19:03:51 UTC
No matter what I do, I really cannot help but add comedy at almost everything I do. As if it's natural to me. Thankfully, it seems effective every time.

Thank you for liking the one shot I did. :D

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gogumavillage January 26 2012, 19:35:26 UTC
hm sad story, hichicchi in the end she marry another guy. u are bad.huhu why. because the lyrics of feeling made u feel confused?

but seem readers didnt see that yet.ahahah just see the kisses

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dageneralpatata January 26 2012, 20:27:26 UTC
The direction they took in this universe is indeed sad, as they did end up with other people. As I said earlier, there is no way I can understand Yonglish the way it is now, HAHA. So I did not base this one on the lyrics, but on the vibe and the emotion that I got on the song. I felt happiness with a hint of desperation and sadness, which got me hooked.

The reason why I made it so is that in life, there are endings such as these. It's not always a "happily ever after" thing. Maybe because I had my own share of experiences that are similar to this that I wrote such things.

The basic idea that I would like to push here is that we should cherish whatever memory we have of a certain person. We should enjoy their company as we do not know when it would end.

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lovelightoflife January 26 2012, 20:08:38 UTC
wow it's bittersweet :(((

and this is just..
"He sang the song that he would not record until 2012, the year she will get married to a certain businessman and he will become a famous rock star in Japan. But they didn't know that yet."
*sigh*

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dageneralpatata January 26 2012, 20:29:07 UTC
I'm quite glad that that line had that effect on you. It means it worked.

But being a goguma, despite writing such things, I HOPE THEY DO GET MARRIED AND CREATE CUTE GOGUMA BABIES, you know.

It's just that writing such stuff gives me creative freedom, and it's something that is kind of refreshing in its own way.

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