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Oct 26, 2008 04:10


Today’s a Gift (One-shot)

Title: Today’s a Present

Fandom: Hey!Say!JUMP!

Author: Read more... )

pairing: hikachii, one-shot fic

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eemir_eera October 26 2008, 17:16:24 UTC
“WHAT!!??” Keito yelled, shocked as he tripped, bumping a chair.

Ryutaro was amused by the act “Now that’s what I call a great sense of PRESENCE!”

waaaa....Keito!!...^_^...haha..nice fic...eventhough quiet weird to read hikaru x chi than ryutaro x chi..haha...^_^....

The past is history, the future is a mystery,
and the present is a gift. That is why it is called a present.......^_^

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dachnayary October 26 2008, 17:21:38 UTC
hello ^^
It's the first time we've met ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting =)

I'm glad that you liked it. Hahah I was inspired by Keito in the making. LOL
Yeah I guess ChiiTaro is moe famous than HikaChii but they're both kawaiii!!!

Hahaha. Quite same quote. ^_^

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eemir_eera October 26 2008, 17:34:26 UTC
haha...well..^_^..I'm a fan of keito..thats why i quote keito part..haha...^_^..yup..yup...the second quote..i used it as my siggie in jumpstart..^_^....gomen ne...i should greet you first before give comment..^_^..................

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dachnayary October 26 2008, 23:45:14 UTC
No, don't worry I didn't mean that you should greet first ^^
I'm happy that you commented nd you read my fic =)

Ohhh. Keito's nice and kawaii!!! and funny too like in the PV making. I like him there. Ehhh??? What's a siggie?

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myztikk October 26 2008, 19:19:23 UTC
2756 words ohhh cant wait to read it xD

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dachnayary October 26 2008, 23:45:34 UTC
Quite long ne ^^

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myztikk October 26 2008, 19:51:18 UTC
omg hikachii is soo awesome ne~ sadly they barely show it on public which makes me sad =[

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dachnayary October 26 2008, 23:47:54 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you think so. Yeah, i want to see HikaChii in real life!!!
That will be sooo kawaiii!!!
But thee's a lot of HikaChii in Your Seen Making *flails*
But after that none. *sulks*

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i_collect_cars October 27 2008, 00:36:12 UTC
Renz-chan! This was so cute! I loved when Chinen calls Hikaru "Hikari-chan"!

And a jealous Chinen is so cute! It made me sad when he cried, but his jealous was so adorable I loved it!

“Hikari-chan, we’ve been together for a long time already, do you really think you can trick me with those overly-used strategies” Chii laughed out loud as he saw Hikaru’s insulted face. HAHA i love all-knowing Chi-chan!♥

“Awww. Come on Hikari-chan. I know what you really want and I want that too.” Hikaru’s eyes widen with what Chii implied. “That’s why I brought a bigger sleeping bag that we can share because it will be hard with a small one like the one you brought” Chii answered with a sly smile on his face.

“AWWW CHII, I LOVE YOU!”

“AISHITERU”

The night is cold but the two are kept warm, not by their clothes (if they wear one), nor by the tent, but by a thing called……. LOVE

SUCH A SWEET ENDING! I LOVED IT!

And I spy Keitaro, AriJima, and TakaYama! [I can guess who the last one was for ;)]

SO CUTE! ♥♥ Excellent job as always!

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dachnayary October 27 2008, 01:05:16 UTC
JJ ^^
Hahaha. Me too. It's soooo kawaii!!! and the fact that only Chii calls him that is just sooo CUTE =)

LOL CHII is always adorable ne.
That was random, I just thought that it will be a funny change if Hikaru's pranks won't work. ^^
Especially to Chii. And a sneaky Chii is an amusing change =)

I'm happy that you loved it *hugs*
Well the other one is HikaTaro. ^_^
Awww. Thanks *smiles*

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anilee0510 October 27 2008, 00:44:40 UTC
WAAAAAAAAAH!!!! RENZ-CHAN!!!!!!! A ONE-SHOT HIKACHII???? WHEEEEEE!!!!

*reads*

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! I LOVE RYUTARO HERE!!!!!!! HE TOTALLY MAKES ME CRACK UP!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YOU SNUCK IN KEITAROU, ARIJIMA, AND TAKAYAMA?!?!?! DOUBLE WHEEEEEEE!!!!!! *flails*

LOL, the radio thing amused me at the beginning. XDDDD PFFT!!! AND RYUTARO'S PAPER...HOW CAN A 13 YEAR OLD UNDERSTAND SUCH BIG FANCY WORDS??? XDDDDDDDDDD ROTFL!!!!

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dachnayary October 27 2008, 01:08:59 UTC
It's quite a while since I've heard from you Ani!! WHEEEE!!! *hugs*
I missed you ^^

O___O;;; You're sooo excited ne. LOL
I LOVE THAT KIND OF RYUTARO SOOO MUCH *flails*
It will be a lot better if there's more pairings and implying them in my fic
is sooo much fun especially KeiTaro. LOL

I'm glad that it did ^^
That's funny isn't it. Ryutaro's sooo intelligent here. ROFL

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