Drabbles100 // Deakins // 001-005

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Comments

[mina_kat9]

These are lovely. I like the first one and the fourth ones best. Those have both physical and emotional hits.

I'm not sure that the third one has enough tension, but it still paints a clear picture.

The last one just makes me sad. Of course.

And the second? Makes me smile.

[heyuwiththeface]

I think that drabbles are the most difficult to write. You have to write something that not only makes sense, but touches the reader in 100 words.

And you wrote 5, succinct, yet clear ones.

Great job :)