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da_phoenix13

Fic: The Journey

Jun 05, 2009 12:56

Fandom: HIMYM
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100 x 5
Pairing: Ted/various
Summary: Ted Mosby's romantic journey can be summed up with five kisses.
Dedicated to: roland44, the biggest Ted fan I know! (This can also be considered an extremely late birthday present. =D)
AN: Written for him_tbbt_100's latest challenge (prompt: kiss). Also, this is the first fanfic I've written ( Read more... )

fanfiction, tv: himym

Comments 21

vimtastic June 5 2009, 23:57:24 UTC

I really love the last few lines of the Miracles one. That really did change Ted's life just like he said it did, and it doesn't seem like a lot of people pay attention to that.

These were wonderful! It makes me wish Ted hasn't been so frustrated all series long though. :(

da_phoenix13 June 8 2009, 15:03:54 UTC

I really want Ted to find happiness long before the end of the series. Like, you don't even know. *hugs Ted*

If only HIMYM weren't a sitcom, they could have based an entire season off the impact the events in Miracles had on both Ted and Barney. Which they didn't really do at all, at least not explicitly. (Barney getting most of his bones smashed, for instance, is never talked about again, ever.) But alas, they have to bring the funniez. =)

Thanks for reading!

jamie55 June 6 2009, 03:56:49 UTC

aww, I like the last one - how everything has been building up for that. Which is true! And which we forget..

da_phoenix13 June 8 2009, 15:05:40 UTC

How can we forget? Isn't that the whole reason people watch the show? ;)

I'm glad you liked it!

secondmezzanine June 6 2009, 04:26:55 UTC

This was absolutely sweet and adorable. Love the moments you've chosen-- and I hope the show will pay off as well as this. :)

da_phoenix13 June 8 2009, 15:07:58 UTC

Thank you so much! I can only hope the ending of the series is this satisfying. But I still have enough faith in the writers. =)

And I love your icon!

secondmezzanine June 9 2009, 00:08:39 UTC

Thanks!! All pineappley and such. :D

girlthethird June 8 2009, 23:01:11 UTC

But he kisses her anyway, trying to hold on to that last thread of hope that they can make it work.

Oh, Teddy boy! *SNIFF*

This is lovely, you've really captured the romanticism of the first two seasons and the faint sadness of the first half of the third. Beautiful.

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Re: You've been nominated at the Legendary Awards! da_phoenix13 July 10 2009, 05:26:59 UTC

I accept! ^_^

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Re: You've been nominated at the Legendary Awards! da_phoenix13 July 10 2009, 12:49:23 UTC

Hehe yeah, I noticed that. No biggie! =)