St. Valentine's Day: Jealous

[da_bao]

Title: Valentine’s Day: Jealous
Pairing: Mizu Natsuki/Ayabuki Mao (AKA Yumizu)

Rating: G

Disclaimer: As much as I want them, they’re not mine to have. They only belong to each other… and Hankyu.

Summary: Mizu gets a little jealous as Ayabuki receives a Valentine’s Day card.

Jealous

Comments

[just_keep_on]

(Psst - one thing you'll wanna change: you've got "his lips" there at the beginning and the end, which I'm sure should be "her lips" XD)

Oh. *happy sigh* I love the idea of how Yumiko catalogues all of Mizu's smiles. It's amazingly cute and works really well. I liked also the description right after it, that slightly sardonic smile ... didn't understand. I couldn't help but grinning also, the knowing between them.

<3333 Thanks so much for sharing! So much wonderful~~~