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[d_kel689]

So...I'm an idiot, and I'm doing NaNoWriMo. I'm stuck on my story and can't even write through the block at this point. But, I'm in love with the story, so, fuck that. I'm calling on YOU ALL for some damn help here. Here's what I've got

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[zootyzoot]

Wow, I LOVE this! Which may have been a bad thing at the time - I got so entranced in reading I almost was late to an appointment :P

Unfortunately I don't think I have nothing to offer in terms of direction. Just some cheering on XD it really is awesome so far. I did find myself wanting to know more about Jack and Clara's relationship. Maybe dedicate a whole chapter to a flashback or something. Clara seems like a very interesting character :) I'd like to know her more. That's about all I can think of :(

[d_kel689]

Thanks. Lol, sorry you were almost late!

Yeah, all my interesting characters seem to die before the book even starts. But, I'll probably have Jack flash back some more.

Thanks for the suggestions!