Is it bad that I like your bad news?! Thank you, hon. I'm astounded that people like my work that much.
Yeah so if there was a flaw in this story I couldn't find it. In fact, I think you may have outdone yourself.
Of course there are flaws, but if you don't find them I won't nitpick them. And thank you! *beams and flails arms in fangirl mode*
But I never get the sense that you are foisting your own ideas of how he should act upon him.
Oh, you don't know how nice it is to hear that! Vorona and Dana can tell you - I agonize over my Justin-voice. If he's too smugly superior, or not loquacious enough, and if his thoughts and feelings make sense. In this story, though, I had certain ideas of what he was going to be going through, and how he'd react to it. I'm glad I didn't come off as manipulative, or Justin as out-of-character.
I'm not sure if I'm explaining this well but I just think it is very cool that you were able to use the flow of how parables in the bible are constructed to fit a character who is so deeply tied to those
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Yeah so if there was a flaw in this story I couldn't find it. In fact, I think you may have outdone yourself.
Of course there are flaws, but if you don't find them I won't nitpick them. And thank you! *beams and flails arms in fangirl mode*
But I never get the sense that you are foisting your own ideas of how he should act upon him.
Oh, you don't know how nice it is to hear that! Vorona and Dana can tell you - I agonize over my Justin-voice. If he's too smugly superior, or not loquacious enough, and if his thoughts and feelings make sense. In this story, though, I had certain ideas of what he was going to be going through, and how he'd react to it. I'm glad I didn't come off as manipulative, or Justin as out-of-character.
I'm not sure if I'm explaining this well but I just think it is very cool that you were able to use the flow of how parables in the bible are constructed to fit a character who is so deeply tied to those ( ... )
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