The Campfire

[czallis]

Title: The Campfire - A ‘Poke The Dragon’ Response
Author: Czallis
Beta: None, so there will probably be mistakes… I haven't written in ages, but this prompt tickled me.
Fandom: Devil Wears Prada
Paring: Miranda / Andy
Rating: PG-13

Prompt: This story is based on pure_ecstasy6's prompt - the ghost stories one. amles80 already had a gorgeous go at it, but hopefully one more

Comments

[jazwriter]

This was so sweet. Rather fabulous, really. I liked how you showed the closeness between the girls and Andy, how Miranda had let Andy get closer and see the real woman behind the mask, and how Miranda had consented to wear more appropriate clothing for the camping trip at Andy's urging. You show us a closeness and warmth between Andy and Miranda that supports the deepening of their feelings for each other. Thanks for the great story. I hope to see more from you.

[amles80]

Oh, this was gorgeous!! My fic was just a very quickly written silly little thing; I'm glad you took the prompt and wrote a real story out of it! :)

It's nice to see Miranda revealing new sides of herself to Andy, and Andy + twins = cute. A wonderful fic!

[kali_blue]

This was a great story. Warm and toasty with an enveloping a sense of family.

I loved the notion that the first time they are going to make love is in a tent. Never would have pictured that. But then again I am slightly doubtful that would be true with the girls mere feet away with only a layer of nylon separating them, yet it could happen with a sugar induced marshmallow/hot chocolate coma or excessive fresh air taking Caroline & Cassidy down for the night. LOL

[czallis]

Haha, I wondered if anyone would say that! That was kind of why I ended it there! I'm not entirely sure I can see it either! Not the tent thing, just the children thing...

Mind you, I have witnessed often the power of a camping trip to utterly knock out children! They sleep like logs! 😄

Thank you!

[medora_macd]

Oh goodness, you really need to write more often. That was delicious -- though it has left me with a strange craving for toasted marshmallows. Thank you for sharing this with us!

[czallis]

Thank you so much for saying that. I'm really glad you enjoyed, since I've always adored your writing!

I teach people to write (little people), but have very little time to put pen to paper myself. Although I am two thirds in to what must be the longest incubated children's novel in history! Anyway, I will try and make more of an effort on here.

[medora_macd]

Teaching little people to write -- what a noble endeavor! Bless you for what you do. Good luck with the novel. And thanks again for the story. I love stories that include the twins and their interactions with Andy and Miranda.

[daemoni2008]

That was delightful. I enjoyed everything in this wonderful tale. Thank you for sharing!!