Comments | cyphs_stories: Fic x 2: White Collar OT3 - Masks (PG-13) and Office Interlude (NC-17). For <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/luc_darling">luc

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Fic x 2: White Collar OT3 - Masks (PG-13) and Office Interlude (NC-17). For luc_darling.

May 14, 2010 16:04

Title: Masks
Rating: PG-13
Words: 730
Warnings: A bit of angstiness
Spoilers: 113 - Out of the Box
Fandom/Pairing: White Collar/Neal/Peter/Elisabeth
A/N: For the amazing and patient luc_darling as a very belated birthday gift. This is a continuation of my fic Fractured Painting but can be read as a separate as well.

( On the first day back at the office )

birthdayfic, fanfiction, white collar, neal/elizabeth/peter

Comments 16

lucdarling May 14 2010, 14:54:18 UTC

The first:

Oh. I think my heart broke a little with Peter's realization that Neal was back to charming the office, Elizabeth crying with Neal. Neal's knowledge that he's wearing a mask and it's hurting the two people he holds dear, but he can't help it. but then he remembered to turn to painting! huzzah! and his feelings came through & it was brilliant. and Neal's on the way to being mended just a bit more.

the second:

:fans self: oooh my.
can I be her? to be so lucky. I love that Peter & Neal probably discussed their plan of attack in their office then went to hers and made it a reality. More love for Elisabeth working counterpoint with Neal to make her husband fall apart. hee!

cyphersushi May 14 2010, 20:37:04 UTC

Yay! I'm so very glad you liked them *smishes* Oh and I wrote all of the second one at work today (slow day), I was positivly wiggling in my chair :p

havenward May 14 2010, 21:54:13 UTC

Love the painting. And. Uhmmm. :completely and utterly brainfails:

cyphersushi May 14 2010, 22:05:32 UTC

*beeeeams*

yanzadracan May 14 2010, 22:53:53 UTC

Beautiful angst and hot sex. *sigh* Be back after...well...never mind.

cyphersushi May 15 2010, 15:03:38 UTC

*grin* I'm so happy you liked!

darling_lisa May 15 2010, 15:27:07 UTC

Oh! The image of Neal slipping on the mask, the idea that he tries so hard to keep the world from knowing. *hugs him to pieces* I love that they both watch over and worry about him and the image of him pouring everything into a painting is just beautiful. Thank you darlin.

Re: second one... GUH.

cyphersushi May 15 2010, 17:02:37 UTC

*beams and smishes* I am so glad you liked darling!

sexycazzy May 16 2010, 10:55:13 UTC

dalldjjfldalkskdjal

OK...takes a deep breath...I need to write a good review...yes...

Masked - I felt a choke in my throat as I read about Neal's mask at work and it slips off when he's going home with Peter - the cracks and everything. But the painting - wow - nice! all the emotions - you showed them through - put goosebumps everywhere.

Office Interlude - *guh* they come together so beautiful! Elizabeth is damn lucky to have Peter & Neal. Totally blew my mind away! ~grins~

cyphersushi May 16 2010, 12:30:59 UTC

*bounces* Thank you for the lovely long comment and I am so glad you liked! I like blowing minds :p