Fiction: Don't Stop Part 37

Mar 25, 2010 17:32

Title: Don't Stop Part 37
Words: 1312
A/N: I was going to give you all of the ending in one final chapter but it seems it will be even longer than I thought so here's a teaser.

The two grappling hooks landed almost simultaneously )

original fiction, don't stop, chrysopoeia

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havenward March 25 2010, 19:08:27 UTC
"Do it yourself if you're that impatient." Sparky replied with a harrumph and snatched the picks from Marie.

By leaving it on the same line you almost let it read like Sparky is talking....

Other than that, wheee! I do love a good air fight. XD

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cyphersushi March 25 2010, 22:21:42 UTC
Thanks! I'll fix it right away - I meant to go back to that but forgot before I posted <3

I so love writing action :D

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honeyjojames March 25 2010, 19:49:41 UTC
Oooh, more awesome words! That was great, sweetie! Looking forwrad to the next bit!

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cyphersushi March 25 2010, 22:22:15 UTC
Wee! Thank you darling :)

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ctrokj March 29 2010, 15:50:38 UTC
Oh I can't wait. I can't wait. I can't wait. MORE!!!!!!

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