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cyphersushi

The Wild - Chapter Four

Nov 11, 2009 14:10

Master Post is here

( Chapter Four )

Comments 12

canadiangoddess November 11 2009, 18:19:12 UTC

Wow!! I LOVE this! At first I was all "genetic experiments WTF??" but I'm SO glad I read it! I love the way you really got into Parker and Eliot's heads in the cells...it felt so real and in character, like something that could almost be reality.

In conclusion (because I could ramble on forever) I LOVE this and you are AWESOME!!

wow...first comment...that's pretty cool

cyphersushi November 11 2009, 22:35:01 UTC

*squee* Thank you! I am so glad you liked it and that it came through the way I wanted it. This comment made me smile brightly in the middle of the airport and I am sure people thought I was slightly nuts :)Thank you again!

yanzadracan November 12 2009, 01:32:06 UTC

Great job. The core characters stayed true while going through a multitude of changes.

cyphersushi November 12 2009, 09:28:21 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting :)

badfalcon November 12 2009, 08:46:52 UTC

I kinda have to take my ass to work but allow me to flail and love and flail and love some more <3

cyphersushi November 12 2009, 09:27:28 UTC

*smishes* Thank you darlin' I am so happy you liked :)

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cyphersushi November 13 2009, 11:45:31 UTC

Thank you! And yeah I felt like a right bastard putting them though that - withing 500 words I had Eliot beaten, drugged and put into a dark cell :)

And I couldn't decide if wanted feline or canine DNA for Eliot so he got a mix... all the best parts.

And yeah, I agree (obviously since I wrote it) that them struggling was more interesting.

ctrokj November 12 2009, 21:59:12 UTC

I love it. :D

cyphersushi November 13 2009, 11:46:43 UTC

Thank you darlin'!