Comments | cynthiasun: A Twilight Fanfic : ALICE

cynthiasun

A Twilight Fanfic : ALICE

Oct 21, 2008 19:12

Alice is going to be an interesting character to write about. I'm going to have to make it up. Here I go. :]

POV: ALICE - Cullen Residence - 8:42 PM

"Oh, Edward," I sung while dancing into his and Bella's room. I interrupted one of their make-out sessions... again. Hehe. Oh well.
Edward glared at me but there was nothing he - or Bella - ( Read more... )

alice, twilight, fanfic

Comments 6

im_dazzled October 21 2008, 23:32:44 UTC

that was awesome :D
you do a good job writing for alice's POV!

cynthiasun October 21 2008, 23:34:44 UTC

aw, thank you xD
it was fun writing it.

d_aria88 October 22 2008, 04:00:16 UTC

Woot fan fic lol XD

d_aria88 October 22 2008, 06:03:15 UTC

Oh theres a few errors that I noticed you just said he she and he in stead of she.
'I could she he was reading one of his gigantic medical volumes.'
And I can't remember where the other one is, :)

cynthiasun October 23 2008, 00:18:43 UTC

I'll go fix those. :]
I seem to make those kind of mistakes the most. The brain has a small disorder. O_o

d_aria88 October 23 2008, 16:34:30 UTC

Yeah, I have grammar/spelling issues. Kinda sux since I want to be am author. :(