Awesome, fabulous, amazing! Fanfuckingtastic! What else can I say? This is some of the most gorgeous, dizzying, lush sex writing I've read in a long time. Truly inspired - and inspiring! I fucking LOVE it to death. GUH!
The dynamic is just perfect, with Jared being just slightly and ohsonicely Dom. And sub!Jensen, is, I've discovered recently, kind of a MAJOR kink of mine. So, yeah, several kinks happily hit in this fic, thx for that.
I've been writing porn all night and then to read this, it makes me feel two ways - firstly, like I have just had a really great night, and aren't I lucky, and secondly, your porn is so amazing, if mine is half or even a quarter as good I will be thrilled.
I didn't know you read SPN. Not that I'm complaining if it means I get such nice feedback from you. Thanks. :D
I think Sub!Jensen is a lot of people's kink. I'm really sort of in lust with Jared right now in a major way, so I couldn't resist making him the boss.
if mine is half or even a quarter as good I will be thrilled... This is exactly what I always say to myself after reading your porn, dear. You're even more of a goddess, I swear! *squishes you*
I read SPN RPS. Sam/Dean fic, yawn. My crack is JA/JDM as Jared usually leaves me cold, but not here! Not in this fic, unh-uh. In this fic he was fucking HAWT!
Sam/Dean fic doesn't do anything for me either. Sometimes I'll read it if it's got a plot, but I get no hotness out of it. I just cannot get past the incest thing, whether it's being flat out ignored in the fic or handled in a really detailed, character-driven way. It's still two brothers fucking.
JDM fic is crack. I'll take him with anybody, really, although I find him less plausible with Jared, at least for casual fucking, which a good deal of SPN RPS (especially involving JMD) is. Not that I don't love my Jared to bits. I'm glad I made him palatable for you here. I would wager he seems too young and puppy-ish for you. Dom!Jared is a whole different animal. :)
For me? and just because? Awww...thank you Sweetie. ;) This was absolutely fantastic. Not too sappy or mushy at all, I loved the raw, hard dirtiness combined with the emotional stuff. These are my favorite types of fic, because to me they're more honest and realistic....hot dirty sexin' should come with feelings and emotions and I absolutely ADORE it when other people 'get' that and write it like that. So thanks...this was perfect, plus it's my new favorite pairing... ;)
I've just gotta tell you that this part...
It's the difference between sex and this thing they do that's beyond just sex. They don't usually use the word love, but it must be there or else he couldn't arch his back off the mattress and drive Jared further into him. It might seem to anyone else like Jared is just being rough, burying himself to the hilt because it suits him to use Jen and make him crumble. He does crumble, all right, but it's nothing sordid and dirty and cruel.
...completely describes what I mean about how hot and dirty should/
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Oh, yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I just wanted to do something nice for you, so it's good to know you like fluffy stuff like this. At heart, I'm a romantic, so I think I'm more confortable writing sex when it's based in a relationship. I'm glad that vibe came off like I wanted it to.
I just wanted to do something nice for you, so it's good to know you like fluffy stuff like this.
I have no idea what I did to deserve you doing something nice for me...but thank you. I LOVE fluffy stuff. I'm such a romantic deep down, that it's nice to read fluffy stuff from time to time, plus this wasn't just fluff, it was really HOT too. ;)
Holy Hell that was hot...and beautiful. The tone of it and your wording and then the SEX! Guh. I have to go to classes after reading that?
They don't usually use the word love, but it must be there or else he couldn't arch his back off the mattress and drive Jared further into him.
I think that was my favorite line. How did you manage to write smut that read less like smut and more like a private invasion? This is gonna be running (or biting, sucking, licking) through my head all day.
I didn't know it was gonna be sappy until I started writing it, then the boys decided they were feeling all mushy. I'm happy it worked and you liked it.
Woman, this is one of the most sensual fics I've read in a long time. I love the desire and trust you've captured - melted my heat into my gut into my pants. What a way to start the day!
Oh PLEASE. I can fangirl on you and crush all I want ;) I hated having to wait even 10 minutes between reading this over my morning coffee outside of Einstiens and getting into the office to reply!
This is just everything so lovely and happy making about them and !!! It makes ME happy, not just hot. It's a very satisfying read in every way.
I hope you plan to post to some communities. Don't make me make you!
I don't know why I'm so chicken about posting to super_real. I think I'm still in denial about writing RPS, LOL. Or maybe I still feel like I don't know the "characters" (LOL again) well enough. Seriously, that's always my problem with writing RPS. I don't feel as secure about the subject matter.
it was absolutely gorgeous, hot, sexy as hell and lots and lots more. If you think you had muse problems, they are most definitely not showing! wow!
I love that the feelings wormed their way in, it makes the sex more fulfilling to read. the slightly!dom!Jared is so sexy, I love him that way. and he doesn't abuse, just gives Jensen what he needs
lets his eyes lock on Jen's for a moment before they're sweeping down over his body in a way that makes him feel both weak and strangely powerful.
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The dynamic is just perfect, with Jared being just slightly and ohsonicely Dom. And sub!Jensen, is, I've discovered recently, kind of a MAJOR kink of mine. So, yeah, several kinks happily hit in this fic, thx for that.
I've been writing porn all night and then to read this, it makes me feel two ways - firstly, like I have just had a really great night, and aren't I lucky, and secondly, your porn is so amazing, if mine is half or even a quarter as good I will be thrilled.
You are a goddess and I worship you.
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I think Sub!Jensen is a lot of people's kink. I'm really sort of in lust with Jared right now in a major way, so I couldn't resist making him the boss.
if mine is half or even a quarter as good I will be thrilled... This is exactly what I always say to myself after reading your porn, dear. You're even more of a goddess, I swear! *squishes you*
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I read SPN RPS. Sam/Dean fic, yawn. My crack is JA/JDM as Jared usually leaves me cold, but not here! Not in this fic, unh-uh. In this fic he was fucking HAWT!
Hmmm, it's probably the Dom that made the dif. ;)
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JDM fic is crack. I'll take him with anybody, really, although I find him less plausible with Jared, at least for casual fucking, which a good deal of SPN RPS (especially involving JMD) is. Not that I don't love my Jared to bits. I'm glad I made him palatable for you here. I would wager he seems too young and puppy-ish for you. Dom!Jared is a whole different animal. :)
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For me? and just because? Awww...thank you Sweetie. ;) This was absolutely fantastic. Not too sappy or mushy at all, I loved the raw, hard dirtiness combined with the emotional stuff. These are my favorite types of fic, because to me they're more honest and realistic....hot dirty sexin' should come with feelings and emotions and I absolutely ADORE it when other people 'get' that and write it like that. So thanks...this was perfect, plus it's my new favorite pairing... ;)
I've just gotta tell you that this part...
It's the difference between sex and this thing they do that's beyond just sex. They don't usually use the word love, but it must be there or else he couldn't arch his back off the mattress and drive Jared further into him. It might seem to anyone else like Jared is just being rough, burying himself to the hilt because it suits him to use Jen and make him crumble. He does crumble, all right, but it's nothing sordid and dirty and cruel.
...completely describes what I mean about how hot and dirty should/ ( ... )
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*squeezes* ♥
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I have no idea what I did to deserve you doing something nice for me...but thank you. I LOVE fluffy stuff. I'm such a romantic deep down, that it's nice to read fluffy stuff from time to time, plus this wasn't just fluff, it was really HOT too. ;)
*smoochies*
~C~
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They don't usually use the word love, but it must be there or else he couldn't arch his back off the mattress and drive Jared further into him.
I think that was my favorite line. How did you manage to write smut that read less like smut and more like a private invasion? This is gonna be running (or biting, sucking, licking) through my head all day.
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I didn't know it was gonna be sappy until I started writing it, then the boys decided they were feeling all mushy. I'm happy it worked and you liked it.
Thanks for the feedback.
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WOW. Just.
Woman, this is one of the most sensual fics I've read in a long time. I love the desire and trust you've captured - melted my heat into my gut into my pants. What a way to start the day!
I am so embarresed by what I've been doing.
*fangirls*
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This feedback is such ♥. I just wanna squeeze you and squeeze you. *loves*
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This is just everything so lovely and happy making about them and !!! It makes ME happy, not just hot. It's a very satisfying read in every way.
I hope you plan to post to some communities. Don't make me make you!
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Long story short: I'm a big baby.
(Thanks for your email BTW. It made me smile. ♥)
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yeah. that's it. guh.
it was absolutely gorgeous, hot, sexy as hell and lots and lots more. If you think you had muse problems, they are most definitely not showing! wow!
I love that the feelings wormed their way in, it makes the sex more fulfilling to read. the slightly!dom!Jared is so sexy, I love him that way. and he doesn't abuse, just gives Jensen what he needs
lets his eyes lock on Jen's for a moment before they're sweeping down over his body in a way that makes him feel both weak and strangely powerful.
beautiful. thank you so much ♥
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I'm glad you liked it. ♥
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