Comments | cynthia_arrow: HP ficlet: Clear (Harry/Ron, PG)

cynthia_arrow

HP ficlet: Clear (Harry/Ron, PG)

Nov 10, 2009 20:05

Be merciful on me, a first-time Harry/Ron writer and a person with a rusty muse. Also, if I slip into present tense anywhere, please tell me. I'm making the switch back to past after months writing in present ( Read more... )

pairing: harry/ron, fic: hp

Comments 5

daybreak777 November 11 2009, 04:12:17 UTC

Aww, that was very sweet. :-)

cynthia_arrow November 16 2009, 23:55:49 UTC

Thanks! :D

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cynthia_arrow November 16 2009, 23:56:12 UTC

Thanks for commenting. :)

desfinado November 12 2009, 21:42:37 UTC

This was lovely! You got their banter (especially Ron's voice) down so well, and I really liked how all of Harry's feelings were tied up in the friendship-feelings. Such a great read, thank you so so much!!

cynthia_arrow November 16 2009, 23:58:13 UTC

Glad you liked it! I started with a conception for a story just a couple hundred words, but it just kept growing. I was hoping I'd let it grow enough that it didn't seem like a short-changed the emotion of such a moment.

Thanks for reading, and for the delightful prompt. I had no idea I could enjoy writing this pairing so much. :)