3 Lost ficlets: Rose (ensemble); Locke, Boone; Desmond/Penny

Oct 15, 2009 21:35

Written for the Great Fangirl Gathering -- Vegas

The Here and Now
Rose, PG, 200 words
Vague spoilers for "The Incident" (5.18)
For alliecat8, for the prompt ensemble, destiny

If there's a word Rose hates more than 'fate,' it's 'destiny' )

pairing: desmond/penny, fic: lost, gen: lost, gfg

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elliotsmelliot October 16 2009, 03:13:45 UTC
Somehow those first two never made to my side of the table, so I am just seeing them now. I just loved them. You really did a great job capturing Rose's voice. It was great that Boone had so little to say this time, but got Locke to listen hard.

And I still just love mine and what you did with the ripples. Thanks so much!

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cynthia_arrow October 19 2009, 00:35:32 UTC
I'm glad you liked yours! Thanks for your feedback on the others, too. :)

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gottalovev October 16 2009, 11:59:55 UTC
ohhh, I had not seen the Locke one, it's really awesome! I love that we don't know if Boone was trying to help or not in the ocean, and even better that he doesn't show up when Locke tries to find him in the jungle. makes the haunting so much more interesting. and I loved the idea that John worried he would lose the use of his legs in the water, great moment.

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cynthia_arrow October 19 2009, 00:36:34 UTC
That's the vibe I was going for with the Locke & Boone story, so that's good to hear. Thanks for your comments. :)

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zelda_zee October 20 2009, 21:50:14 UTC
I hadn't read the Rose one, and I just love it. You did an excellent job with her sensible, sympathetic voice.

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cynthia_arrow October 22 2009, 04:16:48 UTC
Thanks! It was the only one that came relatively easy, so I figured it would turn out okay. :)

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