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lost drabble: desmond/penny for jenthegypsy

Jul 30, 2009 23:29

Title: Time After Time
Pairing: Desmond/Penny
Summary/Note: For Queen jenthegypsy, at the Luau at lostsquee, who requested Desmond. 138 words.

( It's like waking up on a small boat in the middle of a hurricane )

lostsquee, pairing: desmond/penny, fic: lost, event: lost luau

Comments 8

coppering July 31 2009, 04:54:17 UTC

If he has a present, if he hopes for a future, she is it.

perfection... seriously.

cynthia_arrow July 31 2009, 21:20:24 UTC

Aww, thanks! :)

gottalovev July 31 2009, 12:46:53 UTC

that's really great, I love it. I especially love the first line, so evocative ♥

cynthia_arrow July 31 2009, 21:20:44 UTC

Thanks for the feedback, babe. :D

jenthegypsy July 31 2009, 15:40:20 UTC

First line, last line and all the lines in between ~ they are all carefully crafted, each word weighed for it's worth, each image so thoroughly Desmond ~ this is, indeed, perfect. Thank you so very much! ♥

cynthia_arrow July 31 2009, 21:21:50 UTC

Aww...thanks. ♥ I'm so glad you liked it!

siluria August 8 2009, 13:18:15 UTC

This is really lovely, and I absolutely adore that last line!! Beautiful.

cynthia_arrow August 8 2009, 16:57:30 UTC

Thanks so much! :)