I have no idea who this Gokey person is. I get the feeling this is a good thing.
Anywaaaays. Hi, this is a begging comment (and I am using my most wide-eyed and pleading icon just for that reason): I have written a thing and am need of someone to rip it apart in a constructive manner and then help me fix it back together again. That would be you. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease?
I do admit I can't say 'no' to that very adorably sad face.
But, seriously, no begging necessary. I'll be away from my computer all weekend, but once I get back, I'll get right on it. Good timing, too--I just finished Katie's BBB draft.
Ah, who can resist the power of Brendon Urie's pout? No one, that's who. (\o/)
Yay! Thank you, bb. On the plus side it's short - roughly 2000 words - so at least there's that. I'm in the midst of fiddling with it right now but as soon as I get tired of doing that I will send it on over.
I will! Mainly I am unsure of the narrative flow, like there may be something missing or sections that need to be in different places. Um, it is one of my all atmosphere, very little plot type deals, just so you know what you are getting yourself into.
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But like the article mentions, Scott would make a great contestant, I think. :)
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I've been following him on Twitter for the lolz and oh, has he been delivering the douchebaggery.
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its as bad as you'd think.
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Anywaaaays. Hi, this is a begging comment (and I am using my most wide-eyed and pleading icon just for that reason): I have written a thing and am need of someone to rip it apart in a constructive manner and then help me fix it back together again. That would be you. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease?
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But, seriously, no begging necessary. I'll be away from my computer all weekend, but once I get back, I'll get right on it. Good timing, too--I just finished Katie's BBB draft.
Just let me know what kind of feedback you need.
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Yay! Thank you, bb. On the plus side it's short - roughly 2000 words - so at least there's that. I'm in the midst of fiddling with it right now but as soon as I get tired of doing that I will send it on over.
I will! Mainly I am unsure of the narrative flow, like there may be something missing or sections that need to be in different places. Um, it is one of my all atmosphere, very little plot type deals, just so you know what you are getting yourself into.
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