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cynthia_arrow

BSG ficlets (various characters)

Feb 12, 2009 19:42

SPOILERS for "Blood on the Scales."

( Tyrol, PG, almost 100 words )

Comments 8

lyssie February 13 2009, 05:09:04 UTC

*hppysighs*

Oh, Lee. Give it another month, Lee, and then you can fall apart. With a huge bottle of ambrosia.

<3 Brendan.

LEOBEN INNA CELL. That... The symmetry between Sam and Kara being caught with a Cylon named Leoben. Sigh.

(and Laura with Leoben, because that is ALWAYS WIN)

cynthia_arrow February 13 2009, 17:22:45 UTC

I just couldn't resist that symmetry. It is a little fucking spooky.

Thanks for your comments, babe. :)

lizardbeth_j February 13 2009, 06:46:42 UTC

love the Hotdog section. I have no clear idea of how he would think, but this seems very like him to me. He's just a regular guy trying to do the right thing, while the right thing is shifting around his feet.

And the thought of Kara just sitting there at Sam's bedside... *sniff* and poor Lee, he's had a rough day too, if not quite so rough as Sam or Kara. *pats*

cynthia_arrow February 13 2009, 17:24:00 UTC

I have no clear idea of how he would think. Haha, me either. Actually, I'm always having my characters overthink, so I decided it was high time I was honest and just decided it wasn't about thinking in that situation.

I think they've all had rough days. Sheesh. Thanks for reading. :)

trovia February 13 2009, 10:32:07 UTC

Oh, nice!

I love the one with Hot Dog of course. You make me want to ruffle his hair. The ficlet about Sam was also great. I can picture him thinking like that easily.

cynthia_arrow February 13 2009, 17:25:04 UTC

I've always wanted to ruffle Hot Dog's hair, but now more than ever.

I'm glad the bit about Sam rang true. He just looked so defeated, it kind of broke my heart.

Thanks for reading. :)

pellamerethiel February 14 2009, 01:35:56 UTC

Oh, how much I loved your little drabbles :) Especially the Roslin&Leoben and Kara&Lee parts. But you've also nicely portrayed Hot Dog, it was good to read about this situation from his perspective. Good work. :)

It's an odd thing, crying her eyes out in front of this face she's taught herself to hate.
Beautiful fragment :)

"No time for anybody to go to frakkin' pieces, Lee."

So he doesn't.
Love ♥ <3

cynthia_arrow February 15 2009, 19:28:31 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments. ♥