MCR fic: Bob/Ray, R

Dec 18, 2008 19:30

*hands* First experiment with the pairing. It's kind of rough around the edges, but I promised it like two days ago, and it wasn't supposed to get this motherfucking long. I've gotta be gone for the weekend, so here it is, before it's too late ( Read more... )

rpf: bandom: mcr, pairing: bob/ray

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bloodbelieve December 22 2008, 12:09:14 UTC
I love this. Absolutely amazing, and your characterisations are so believable. Spot on ♥

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themoononastick December 30 2008, 18:47:42 UTC
I really love this. The pacing is excellent, as is the characterisation. And I adore the moments of misunderstanding and tension and the way they're resolved - it all feels very real. ♥

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anoneknewmoose January 15 2009, 08:20:50 UTC
Oh, this was really fantastic. :D

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gurrier September 1 2009, 15:57:16 UTC
This is wonderfully... domestic isn't quite the right word. I love how you evoke existing friendship, both between Ray and Bob, and with the rest of the band. The moment in the kitchen and then the awkwardness and the slow hungover pace in the morning are wonderful!

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