I am so glad I have insomnia now :D This was amazing!
Then it ceased to be a trap and started to be something so deep she was often afraid of it. <--- That? Was just beautiful. That whole paragraph was beautiful!
This is so getting put in my memories. You rock, hon♥
So...I live in a sorority...with 45 women, and we have a large room where about 20 of us keep our computers. As it is finals week, it is packed full of people right now. I was scanning my flist, saw this, and literally said out loud: "Thank God." :) Of course everyone looked up and I sheepishly modified the window so it was small enough to not evoke stares, and read away, not caring about the content, just happy at the NC-17 rating. But damnit if you didn't pull at the ol heartstrings. I love Jate in all forms, but the comfortable day to day stuff is my favorite, and you wrote it beautifully. Thank you taking me away from my studies and helping me discover them in a whole new way :)
Aww...that was such a nice bit of feedback! I'm sitting as we speak in a computer lab, so I can sympathize with hiding the dirty fanfic, but 45 women...*shakes head* Bless your heart. That has to be crazy at times.
this fic is beautiful. I love the description! you can literally feel the heat of the day, their wariness, then the tension building up until the release. It still feels weird to me reading Jate and liking it, but that's because of your talent ♥
Thanks so much! Have I told you lately how much I appreciate your willingness to read things, even if they're not your cup of tea. Not everyone can do that, but you're on a short list of people I deeply appreciate for that very reason. Thanks.
this was STEAMY! :D very good Or she said, “It’s too fucking hot today,” as she lay there and tried to imagine air conditioning, and failed. I could totally feel the pressing heat while reading that! I haven't read jate smut in a while so THANK YOU for this! :D
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Then it ceased to be a trap and started to be something so deep she was often afraid of it. <--- That? Was just beautiful. That whole paragraph was beautiful!
This is so getting put in my memories. You rock, hon♥
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"Thank God." :)
Of course everyone looked up and I sheepishly modified the window so it was small enough to not evoke stares, and read away, not caring about the content, just happy at the NC-17 rating.
But damnit if you didn't pull at the ol heartstrings. I love Jate in all forms, but the comfortable day to day stuff is my favorite, and you wrote it beautifully. Thank you taking me away from my studies and helping me discover them in a whole new way :)
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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I love the description! you can literally feel the heat of the day, their wariness, then the tension building up until the release.
It still feels weird to me reading Jate and liking it, but that's because of your talent ♥
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Or she said, “It’s too fucking hot today,” as she lay there and tried to imagine air conditioning, and failed. I could totally feel the pressing heat while reading that!
I haven't read jate smut in a while so THANK YOU for this! :D
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