Title: Gave Up Before I Started
Pairing: Kara/Anders
Rating: R?
Summary: Aimless, goofy post-'Crossroads' porn. 1500 words.
Note: So, I made the grave error of asking
lyssie for prompts late at night. She gave me gamble and
dodecahedron. Consequently, she gets a silly-ass story.
And, FYI, this cannot possibly be construed as covert slash. :p
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Gave Up Before I Started )
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And the bet, too. And--
It's really hot, and silly, but not silly in a way that isn't so very them.
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I figured you would approve of this brand of silly. I don't know why all my K/S fic comes out emo; I should take a page from your book more often. :)
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Well, your emo balances my fluffiness? Or something?
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"Gonna turn you on with my dodecahedron," he replied lasciviously.
That? Was awesome.
Just lovely, hot smut and I adore it when Sam is called "Mr. Thrace."
Because he totally is... and he loves it.
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Thanks for reading. :)
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Kara," he said. "I think I was really, really bored when you were gone."
Heh.
"You missed me," she said, poking him in the ribs playfully before she realized just how much they didn't say things like that, not since that bewildering day she returned. And not playfully.
I love this line.
And the ending - got to love the irony there. Nicely done. :)
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Thanks for your feedback. :)
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:giggles:
:grins some more:
Cynthia, you have definitly brightened up the War Room today.
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:) Thanks.
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And you get bonus points for creative use of dodecahedron! I would've just thrown things, probably. :)
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Thanks for reading, dear. :)
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