Comments | cynthia_arrow: House ficlet: Four Minutes (House/Wilson)

cynthia_arrow

House ficlet: Four Minutes (House/Wilson)

Dec 14, 2007 23:58

I'm gonna have to join a H/W comm, aren't I? *sigh ( Read more... )

Comments 38

triedunture December 16 2007, 01:15:34 UTC

Sweet! A sandwich-stealing story that's really about being in a long-term relationship! With a sandwich as a metaphor!

I am all-around pleased with it.

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 05:54:05 UTC

I live on heavy-handed metaphor, LOL. Thanks for your feedback. :)

mystcphoenxcafe December 16 2007, 01:48:49 UTC

Greetings!

Very kyool! :-D I love the snark between them - it so totally fits! :-D And the way they-care-without-showing-it is just wonderful and so in character for them.

I agree - you might want to clarify the day 261 a bit more - I was confused too until I read the comments, but other than that, great fic! :-)

-Katrina

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 05:54:28 UTC

Thanks so much for reading! :)

amy_119 December 16 2007, 02:51:16 UTC

I really enjoyed this! Seeing Wilson pissed off at House is kind of a nice change from a lot of the fic out there. You write the banter very well! Good job!

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 06:34:26 UTC

Thanks, especially for saying that about the banter. I'm still pretty new at this...

:)

genagirl December 16 2007, 03:04:29 UTC

Awwwww. Love Wilson handing over half the sandwich. So cute but so IC.

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 06:34:42 UTC

Thanks! :)

gottalovev December 16 2007, 03:58:36 UTC

you really have them good! that was awesome :)

poor Wilson, he has no chance. I could see House's smug smile as he got the sandwich... adorable fic *pets Jimmy*

cynthia_arrow December 17 2007, 06:35:46 UTC

Thanks, babe! I'm slowly but surely getting the hang of writing for this fandom. I kind of have to: it's EATING MY BRAIN. *giggles*