You have no idea how much I love you right now! This is awesome, hon! It's so much fun and whoa, with the hot and you managed to include everyone - wow - EVEN Lucius Malfoy, incredible! Thank you so much for that, I know he's not your cup of tea!
The parts about Lily and James were great - I totally buy Lily as a sort of a crush of Sirius' and James as his fuck-buddy.
And Remus all alpha on the verge of a full moon - you're too good to me! :D
I loved all the sections, but especially the Sirius/Severus one. Like I said before, there's just something so hot about Sirius in pursuit of Severus - and I had said I wanted to see Sirius convince him that he meant it and that's just what you have here. Fantastic! That was so totally hot. I loved Sirius sneaking into the Slytherin common room too. That's so perfectly him. And such great dialog! You really bring them too life. I could see it all perfectly.
Who in their right minds wouldn't love almost-wolfy Remus? Does such an oblivious person actually exist? :)
You might not believe it, but I'm not entirely blind to the hotness of Lucius Malfoy. I just can't write villains, so I can't write any actual porn. I have a hard enough time with Draco, and I can only really deal with him when he's halfway rehabilitated--but then, you have to manage to hold onto the power and charm of him somehow anyway, despite losing the nastiness. It's precarious but possible with him. With Lucius? Not so much. Still...hot.
You're a dear for being amused at my rambly, barely-edited smut, especially the Sirius/Severus. It was just going to be random porn, but those two defy PWP. And they never shut up! GAH, it's like some bizarre mish-mash of the difficulties of Jack/Sayid (emo and talky) and DesmondSawyer (self-protective and half surly). Maybe they would be easier to write as adults, but then I'd be back to writing Alan Rickman (unavoidable for me) rather than this strange little emo and
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The parts about Lily and James were great - I totally buy Lily as a sort of a crush of Sirius' and James as his fuck-buddy.
And Remus all alpha on the verge of a full moon - you're too good to me! :D
I loved all the sections, but especially the Sirius/Severus one. Like I said before, there's just something so hot about Sirius in pursuit of Severus - and I had said I wanted to see Sirius convince him that he meant it and that's just what you have here. Fantastic! That was so totally hot. I loved Sirius sneaking into the Slytherin common room too. That's so perfectly him. And such great dialog! You really bring them too life. I could see it all perfectly.
Thank you so much! *mwah* ♥
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Who in their right minds wouldn't love almost-wolfy Remus? Does such an oblivious person actually exist? :)
You might not believe it, but I'm not entirely blind to the hotness of Lucius Malfoy. I just can't write villains, so I can't write any actual porn. I have a hard enough time with Draco, and I can only really deal with him when he's halfway rehabilitated--but then, you have to manage to hold onto the power and charm of him somehow anyway, despite losing the nastiness. It's precarious but possible with him. With Lucius? Not so much. Still...hot.
You're a dear for being amused at my rambly, barely-edited smut, especially the Sirius/Severus. It was just going to be random porn, but those two defy PWP. And they never shut up! GAH, it's like some bizarre mish-mash of the difficulties of Jack/Sayid (emo and talky) and DesmondSawyer (self-protective and half surly). Maybe they would be easier to write as adults, but then I'd be back to writing Alan Rickman (unavoidable for me) rather than this strange little emo and ( ... )
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