The shop

[ldydragon7]

Jamal meets the shop.  Ummm warning for possible cheese?  This is just a short little thing, written while proctoring a test.

Comments

[ari_raid]

No, all the ghosts there will be conveniently brought along by the messed up people you meet, Jamal.

Loved this! It's nice to see from Jamal's POV again, and there's a good contrast between the warm, fullness feeling of the shop as we know it and the empty potential it has here.

[ldydragon7]

Thank you, I'm glad the contrast and sence of potential came across. I had fun discribing the shop.

As for Jamal, he is perfectly well aware of that and just what to make sure there is enough room for all the ghosts that well be invited there. :P

[aopt]

God I love Jamal pieces. And this... I adore this kind of dusty, vaguely abandoned house atmosphere. That and the hints of the future.

One thing -
Out of the corner of his eye he caught a flash of pick

Do you mean pink?

[ldydragon7]

*facepalm* Thanks for catching that, its fixed now.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I'm glad, he is so much fun to write. I had fun playing with what the shop was, knowing what it would become, I’m glad the atmosphere I was going for came across well.

[smokexscribbles]

D'aww I liked it a bunch. <33 We need fluff sometimes.

[ldydragon7]

I'm glad. I'm happy to help provide it.