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[ldydragon7]

Charaters: Jamal, Candy, Shell, Rex, Sarah and mentions of Robin

Part 2: Gifts

“Turn around and close your eyes.”
Candy turned her back to Jamal and dramatically clapped her hands over her eyes. She peered out through the cracks between her fingers.
Jamal chuckled. “No peeking.”
“How did you kn-I mean I’m not peeking!”
“Because you always peek,

Comments

[smokexscribbles]

CAN WE GET SOME OMINOUS UP IN HERE?

Great job. I liked Candy's reaction, made me laugh XD And I think it's nice, them being ready to fight if they have to.

Saraaaaah, keep that ring on....

[ldydragon7]

At least some foreboding. I believe Iambic will be bringing in the ominous with what she is working on.
I'm glad you liked it, and I agree I liked that bit too.

Hey, aren't you the one who came up with the idea of Sarah accepting the ring out of politeness and not really wearing it.

Thanks for you help by the way, after that conversation this just flowed. (of course it also kept me up till almost 3 am becasue once I'd started I couldn't stop until it was done.)