Comments | cyndrarae: Fic: Sleeping with the Enemy (Gilmore Girls, Jess/Dean) (8/?)

cyndrarae

Fic: Sleeping with the Enemy (Gilmore Girls, Jess/Dean) (8/?)

Oct 19, 2009 15:21

Previous chapters: One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven |

( When Dean stirred, Jess’ first instinct was to go dead limp and pretend to sleep. But Dean didn’t exactly wake up. Instead he shifted and slid in the bed in a way that... dear sweet Lord... the sweats two sizes too large slipped off his waist, exposing more skin than Jess should have the right to witness. )

misc fic, fic: gg: sleeping with the enemy, fandom: gilmore girls

Comments 18

superkika_84 October 19 2009, 20:46:16 UTC

OMG! This was perfect. I can totally see them... They are so hot!
Can't wait for more!
Wonderful story!
Hugs,
Kika

cyndrarae October 20 2009, 14:19:26 UTC

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Glad you're enjoying this story :)

astrangerfate October 20 2009, 00:30:15 UTC

Heeeeeeeee! :D Lovely to see this, hon! I'm so excited to see hot sex where it goes next! :P

cyndrarae October 20 2009, 14:22:30 UTC

Hey you! Glad you're still enjoying this :) Umm... hot sex is a little ways away, as in I haven't actually written any? *hides* :D

zomzoms October 20 2009, 20:08:09 UTC

Jess smirked. “You should know by now, Forester. I like to see you riled up. You’re hot when you’re… difficult.”

Isn't he just?!! There's nothing sexier than a riled up, Dean, Jared or Sam.

I've loved the build up to this fic. It made the kissing scene above all that more intense, cos of all the anticipation for it to happen.

Off to the next chapter.

cyndrarae October 22 2009, 20:11:44 UTC

:D Thank you sweetheart! Glad you enjoyed the buildup, hope it didn't drag too much :P

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cyndrarae December 18 2009, 09:13:08 UTC

:D I'm glad you liked so far hon. Thanks so much!! :)

heatherofnight March 1 2010, 15:17:15 UTC

I'm going back and commenting on the chapters I didn't get to the first time around. Because I was, you know, in such a rush to get to the conclusion.

I adore how Jess and Dean banter in this chapter. And the slide of too large sweat pants and soulful kisses...and...*gulp*

cyndrarae March 18 2010, 18:01:24 UTC

Imagine the restraint Jess has to exercise, not ripping off the loose sweats off those heavenly hips right there hehe ;) Thanks sweetie... I'm going to write back to all of your responses now!!