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cyndrarae

Covenant fic: The witch riding your back (2/?)

Nov 16, 2008 14:28

A/N: Please see warnings in the first part. It starts with sort of non-con and moves into dub-con, although its all happening only in Pogue's mind. Kind of ;)

( Secretly, he hoped that Danvers was right and that it was just a one-time thing. But his witchy sixth sense kept nagging at him, telling him it couldn’t possibly be that easy. Nothing ever was, not with Pogue Parry. )

misc fic, fic: covenant: witch riding your back

Comments 13

alexiel_neesan November 16 2008, 11:49:35 UTC

You like messing with people minds, don't you?

I remembered that I liked this guy when I saw the movie - and you're not leaving the poor guy time to breathe. He's very a seventeen guy here, desperate for someone to help, but not wanting to apprear vulnerable to anyone. I don't know whether to shake him or to hug him.

cyndrarae November 18 2008, 13:26:22 UTC

Thanks for reading again sweetie! :) Yep I like torturing cute guys haha ;P I think it will get better starting next chapter.. glad you're enjoying hon :) cheers!

anonymous November 16 2008, 11:58:57 UTC

I have no idea what this fandom is; can't even remember if I've ever even heard of the Covanent but you've got me hooked!

I just want to hug Poque, he seems so torn up and wrung out. The way you describe his as 'macho' makes it easy for me to understand how this is affecting him even without knowing the actually story line. Great Job!

sakuyaku November 16 2008, 12:00:25 UTC

This is me. I forgot to log in.
D:>

It's five in the morning. To early for coherent sentences and computer-y-usage.

cyndrarae November 18 2008, 13:28:06 UTC

Hey you! :) Thank you so much for your lovely review hon. And this when you don't even know what this fandom is!! :) You're wayyyy too nice to me really :D *clings*
This is actually pre-film so basically got nothing to do with the film at all hehe. Its just a story of 4 boys who go to Spenser's Academy and who just happen to be witches hehe.. ;) cheers hon.

anonymous November 19 2008, 01:35:11 UTC

*snort* Witches.
Will there be pointy-hat wearing and cackling? And nose warts?

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juxtaposefantsy November 16 2008, 14:05:40 UTC

I think that you need to write more and do it now, haha. I am a broken record, aren't I?

I echo the other posters who enjoy Pogue's desperate clinging to his macho self while suffering a sexual crises. It's very sexy and makes me want to read much more. And I hope Caleb ends up playing a big role in Pogue's reluctant sexual evolution (and the incubus, too, of course). I love this kind of dub-con. It's hot as hell.

So, more, more, more!!!

cyndrarae November 18 2008, 13:29:27 UTC

:D I love that you are reading and enjoying this sweetie! Yeah Caleb will play a big role in future chapters, I just need to get to them heh. Will post something soon, RL's being a bitch again, sorry. cheers hon :) *hugs*

endora_prue November 25 2008, 09:32:31 UTC

I remember this movie when it came out. I hunted for fan fic but could never find much.

I'm really enjoying your story - you've got me hooked too. Looking forward to more!

cyndrarae November 25 2008, 19:12:54 UTC

Woah someone else is reading! That's awesome! :) cheers hon, I will try to update soon :)

kuhekabir November 28 2008, 08:37:02 UTC

this is so awesome...i normally dont comment on every single update...only on the last one but this time i do need to squeeeee

SQUEEEEEEEEE

you so do need to write more asap...heading off to the next part...maybe part 4 will then magically apear? hm...will it? *pokes at you*

cyndrarae November 29 2008, 08:49:15 UTC

Yayyy :D Thank you for squeeing!! :) I'm working on Part 4 sweetie.. wish I COULD make it magically appear.. all i'd have to do is fantasize it and voila.. it'd be on paper the next morning hehe ;P Too bad I can't do that heh. cheers again for reading and reviewing hon :)