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May 12, 2009 00:34


Chapter 4 is posted. Also, this story's gotten bigger than originally planned. I decided to split some chapters in half, and extend things a little. Nobody minds a longer story, right? XD

Enjoy!

Title: Vespertine
Chapter: The Truth
Pairing: Itachi/Sakura
Rating: M
Summary: Two enemies strike a bargain to save what they both hold dear. He will reveal a ( Read more... )

sakura, fanfiction, itasaku, itachi

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syl_luvs_silver May 12 2009, 08:00:50 UTC
I am off to read this new chapter, woohoo.
And oh, get some sleep, will you? :P

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syl_luvs_silver May 12 2009, 12:34:43 UTC
Oh, I've just read it and I loved it. The development in their relationship is so unhurried and utterly believable... and yay, Itachi starts to share the goss.

Not to mention that I got a little (alright, massive) thrill when I saw that you decided to use the song after all. :D It's very fitting for this chapter!

ps: ST lyrics are wrong. It's 'and I can't live alone in this life', not 'lie'. :P

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cynchick May 12 2009, 18:05:14 UTC
Oh. Well thats what it showed on the site. I copy-pasted it. It fits better this way anyway. :P

Glad you liked the chapter!

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hiwatari_ivanov May 12 2009, 11:32:27 UTC
Yay! A new chapter. This has made my day happier indeed.

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cynchick May 12 2009, 18:05:40 UTC
Yay! XD

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zelha May 12 2009, 12:40:19 UTC
>DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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cynchick May 12 2009, 18:06:20 UTC
Lol. Did you notice I cut it in half? So technically youve read 4 and 5. Also, "6" is with the beta. XD

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zelha May 12 2009, 21:37:35 UTC
I noticed! And I actually thought: "Oh dear, Cynny is so going to get mauled with this cliffie/teaser."

XDDDD

Yay for 6! Moar, moar! >D

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littledustbunny May 12 2009, 12:59:01 UTC
ahhh that was so painfully teasing! I want to read mooorrrrre :) love it!

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cynchick May 12 2009, 18:07:01 UTC
Thanks. Next chapter wont take as long to update, since its already written. XD

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tamgelb May 12 2009, 23:03:49 UTC
Hi there. I've been a fan of your stories for awhile. I really like where this one is going! I'm very curious to see what Itachi will reveal in the next chapter.

Itachi's comments on Sakura being a lumberjack are great fun. Combined with his narration of the state of affairs before Konoha was founded...about children being forced to be shinobis at a young age...it makes me wonder what exactly Itachi would rather be, if he was not a ninja.
hehe, I'm getting visions on Monty Python now..."I've always wanted to be a lumberjack!" (yes, I'm a dork like that)

Anyways, great story so far and looking foward to reading more.

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cynchick May 13 2009, 17:32:20 UTC
Thanks! Lol, Monty Python. Thats awesome. Now Im wishing that when they left the clinic Itachi should have said "I dont want to go in the cart! Im feeling much better!" XD

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