As some of you are no doubt aware, I have spent the last 2+ weeks feverishly knocking a website together to display my calligraphy and art. I haven't been posting about the sundry adventures, misadventures, frustrations and triumphs of this crazed undertaking simply because it would have taken time away from production. Many battles with CSS and
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Detail editing:
1. In the ketubah personalization form - partway through your list of brides' potential statuses, it swaps the order of Hebrew and English, I think for the last two options.
2. The third sentence of your "About the Artist" doesn't have an ending. ("It was the start of a hobby and a passion. The next year she calligraphed her own ")
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Quite navigable as well. I never got lost or confused and I found all the information you provided to be clear, relevant and easy to find. Most content nitpicking has been taken care of, so I shall not repeat it.
Two things, though-
1) You've blurred all the named on the ketubot, except for Ashira's. Was that intentional?
2) The main page seems a bit sparse for an artist's website. On all the other pages, the cleanness really adds to the experience, but I think I expect to see a concrete example of an artists's work when I first visit the site. I'm curious what your opinion of that may be.
Overall, I think it's fantastic.
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