Comments | cyn_inc: One-shot: Waterfall by Night

cyn_inc

One-shot: Waterfall by Night

Jun 01, 2010 18:07

Rating: PG / K+
Summary: My very own metafiction.
Disclaimer: Naruto and Jurassic Park belong to their respective owners! I'm making no material profits here.

( Waterfall by Night )

fandom: naruto, one-shot, char: minato, fic: waterfall by night, crack, 500themes, challenge

Comments 10

ivy_tsuta June 2 2010, 21:39:51 UTC

Wow, that was really nice. You are so good at not making yourself a Mary-Sue. It was really realistic and filled with nice details.

If it were me, I wouldn't have talked at all. I would be blushing and smiling but not talking. xD

But, yeah, really nice story. I like the way you did this theme.

cyn_inc June 3 2010, 16:58:34 UTC

Thanks!
I'm glad it wasn't MS-ish (else I might just have had to off myself, haha).
Regarding the blushing: lol. But then there wouldn't be much of a story if nothing happened. XD

ivy_tsuta June 4 2010, 00:28:42 UTC

Yes, no. You weren't don't worry. (I might of had to do it for you. >:])

I know. Dx Haha, I would be horrible in meeting someone.

sedia June 18 2010, 05:57:01 UTC

For taking the challenge in a comedic way I don't think anyone could do better. Honestly I was in tears from laughing in several places and I could so imagine myself doing the exact same things and having the exact same thoughts (the Jurassic Park line was utterly hilarious, I had to stop for like 5 mins cause I was laughing so much). Definitely being added to my favorites list :) Great work hun and if all of your writing before bed turns out like this than I want to read more! :D

cyn_inc June 26 2010, 12:24:52 UTC

Coming from you, that's high praise! Thank you so much, I'm ecstatic and honoured you thought it was that good. I never knew I could write comedy that actually got people laughing, hehe. *^^*

You know, a few months back I was seriously considering putting down my pen permanently after I'd finished some of my ongoing fics. I was really disappointed with a couple of things that happened, but... writing is my crack, I guess.

sedia June 27 2010, 18:30:52 UTC

lol why is it "high" praise if it comes from me x3 and never put down your pen! Your a wonderful writer! I want to read more! :D

cyn_inc June 27 2010, 22:11:58 UTC

Because you're smart and honest enough to tell when a fic's crappy, of course. My time at FFnet taught me to never expect much of random readers, hehe. And... *blush*

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