(Untitled)

May 18, 2012 05:10

Leave a comment

Comments 89

jerkseverywhere May 18 2012, 14:46:57 UTC
oh god this is PERFECT you are PERFECT

it is the first piece of writing in the 1d fandom that makes me laugh as much as their interviews?? you wrote them so well! i could hear their voices how do you DO THAT.

it was so sweet and so plausible. like usually i can't read everyoneisgay!fic because it's never addressed like "oh this is weird we're all gay" but you did that and you did that amazingly and it was so impressive. also you took all those overused cringey characterizations and made them so good (like sasspot louis and niall/food otp).

absolute faves bits if i HAVE to choose: harry as sexuality guru, possessive!louis, all of liam's dialogue (SO SPOT ON), harry/louis and zayn/liam first kisses had me cheering, and of course niall, everything niall. i can't even, with niall. ugh.

thank you sooo much for writing this, i'm going to be rereading this approx 500 times. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU \o/ i hope it's even half as enjoyable as it is was for me reading this :)

Reply

cyclogenesis May 22 2012, 08:07:51 UTC
Aaaah thank you!! I'm so glad it made you laugh, there are some pretty good stories in this fandom so far but I'm like but where are the lols though! And I'm pleased that their voices rang true for you. Do you know what it's like writing a 17k story in a fandom you've never written before?! SCARY, is what it's like, because what if they sound all wrong? So it's nice to know that wasn't the case. <333

Honestly mostly I don't fuck with coming outs and questioning gay feelings because let's be real that's like every queer narrative ever and I'd rather they just bang, but it really felt right to do it here because everything's all heightened emotions and whatevs, and I thought it would make sense for Harry to want to get it all out there, because frankly I'd have a harder time believing that Harry doesn't know what's up with his own sexuality and hasn't thought things through ( ... )

Reply


tamzinrose May 18 2012, 14:49:48 UTC
happy birthday!
why did this not go on forever?! be longer! i wanted to follow them through x factor AND BEYOND.

Reply

cyclogenesis May 21 2012, 23:56:43 UTC
In my heart it goes on forever! Basically all my fic in this fandom is going to be me looking at this cuddlepile of a band and being like "but how? *squints*" and then attempting to answer that question with fanfiction.

Thank you! <3

Reply


clarkward May 18 2012, 14:53:35 UTC
Aw, this was great! I loved the tone of the whole thing, so fun and sexy but still uncertain about everything and then certain . . . idk, you know what I mean. I was surprised by how much I dug the Zayn/Liam thing!! And I loved Louis' territoriality! And Harry's sweetness, and Niall's everything. Really a fantastic job, I hope you get all the comments in the world <3 Happy birthday!

Reply

cyclogenesis May 22 2012, 08:09:31 UTC
Thank you muffin! <333333333

Reply


brokendrums May 18 2012, 14:58:09 UTC
holy god this was brilliant! I absolutely love ot5 and especially niall ships so this was wonderful. I loved that this was at judges houses so there's a running theme of worry if they don't get through and never see each other again and how they're just going to continue on together when they do get through. I really liked that it was such a group thing, not just three people joining in on a couple as well. eeek loved it, i don't know what else to say about it. Also, happy birthday! x

Reply

cyclogenesis June 9 2012, 07:21:01 UTC
Ahh thank you darling! I just posted another Niall-centric OT5 tonight...I think at this point it's safe to say I have a Thing. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for birthday wishes as well! ♥

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

cyclogenesis June 9 2012, 07:22:43 UTC
Thank you!! I really wanted to find a balance between acknowledging the queerness and not making it into a big thing, so I'm sure glad that worked for you especially, thank you again for commenting darling. <3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up