Comments | cyandragonfly: Original fic

cyandragonfly

Original fic - Untitled

Jan 19, 2012 22:41

Title: Untitled
Prompt: femslash100's #302 - Burn
Fandom: Original
Pairing: OFC/OFC
Rating: PG

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( She stopped the game all of a sudden, hands stilling in the air between our torsos... )

fanfiction, length: 0-200, fandom: original, rating: pg

Comments 6

joelthecat January 19 2012, 17:52:41 UTC

Very, very, very nice. Your OFCs have voices of their own and individualized characters that make them a pleasure to read. Well done.

cyandragonfly January 19 2012, 20:54:10 UTC

Three 'very's? I live for three 'very's. Thank you so much for not only leaving me a review to gush over but making it helpful in it's own right - I'm always worried about characters being too self serving and not having personalities.

xiotonks January 19 2012, 22:54:49 UTC

If this was facebook, I'd like it.

Sorry for not being overly helpful ;)

cyandragonfly January 23 2012, 12:47:00 UTC

Hehe, well, thank you for the kind words anyhow!

lucifers_toy January 22 2012, 09:02:04 UTC

that's gorgeous

cyandragonfly January 23 2012, 12:46:17 UTC

thanks :)