Fanfiction || Healing Touch || Amy/River

Aug 08, 2010 09:21

Title: Healing Touch
Author: Sapphire Smoke cuzimastripper
Beta(s): tiddlypom
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Amy/River
Completed Length: 10,002 words
Timeline: Well, Amy doesn't remember Rory. So. Yeah. After that but before the Pandorica.
Summary: Being helpless has never sat well with River.
Prompt: "Shaving/Depilation" for KinkBingo ( my card )
A/N: Okay, ( Read more... )

challenge: kinkbingo, tv: doctor who, writing: fanfiction, genre: femslash, character: river song, character: amy pond

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hahns_girl August 8 2010, 17:37:46 UTC
Now THIS was just about as full of win as something can get! This was hot, awesome, amazing win! THe only two words of it I didn't like was the two in bold THE END!

Now as for the bits I did like, love actually...
"she shoots her a look that immediately dampens her panties"
"Amy’s a bit hesitant to look up, knowing she’s going to be confronted by a full-frontal River" - not a moment there should be any hesitancy towards lol
"River’s entire state of being is erotic to Amy, but it’s increased tenfold by being naked"
"her low, primal moans of ecstasy made an anthem for just how sexy this was"

but my absolute favourite line?
"Okay, hi blunt; meet River. Oh, you’ve already met? I see"

...the grin I have on my face now is not going anywhere soon thanks to this!!! (Oh, and I love your awkward Doctor interrupting at the end lol)

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cuzimastripper August 9 2010, 02:04:39 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you think so. Porn is either really loved or really hated in the fic world lol. Especially kinky!porn ;]

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margotgrissom August 9 2010, 09:56:12 UTC
I loved this! Well-written and very, very hot!

Funny, too. Okay, hi blunt; meet River. Oh, you’ve already met? I see. nearly had me spray coffee all over my monitor. ;)

This was excellent, filthy distraction from an annoying day at the office, so... thanks!

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cuzimastripper August 9 2010, 10:12:16 UTC
Thank you!

Haha, you know, all my stuff is so NSFW and yet it seems alot of people do read it at work xD

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torak303 August 9 2010, 10:07:27 UTC
This was AWESOME AND HOT!!!!

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cuzimastripper August 9 2010, 10:12:34 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^

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shoheen August 9 2010, 20:39:43 UTC
Oh. My. God!!!
I love your videos. I love your fic. If I weren't taken I think I'd ask you to marry me! Seriously. Great stuff. And aside from the general squee, you've got the doctor's voice down to a t. Brilliant stuff.
Now I'm just going to go and get some clean pants...
:P

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cuzimastripper August 10 2010, 07:18:58 UTC
lol. Thank you ^_^ I'm always open to marriage proposals... and making people ruin their pants lol

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crackdmoonlight August 15 2010, 16:41:24 UTC
Loooooved this! And seeing River make the normally cocky Amy meek is so cute. I think River/Amy might be my new favorite pairing.

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cuzimastripper August 15 2010, 22:59:27 UTC
Thanks!

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